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The Calamitous Bob 203: Second Chances

🕑 Added 2024-05-24 15:27:30 +0000 UTC

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Eifer

Wonder how, and when, Viv will end up punishing The Azure Lady. Hopefully either in a awesome fight or by annoying her enough until she begs for it to stop. Stupid water bitch.

Trevor Mergen

Thanks!

ItWasIDIO!!

Well upgrades indeed

A B

Edit suggestions: face frowns told -> face frowned told

A B

Edit suggestion: Errand figments of strength --> Errant figments of strength or told me -> or tell me such a hyman gesture -> such a human gesture

Matt DiMeo

Thine should by “thy” everywhere, unless followed by a vowel or unless meaning “yours”. Thou shouldst, art, wert, dost instead of should, are, were, doest.

matt

“You said it was for testing functionality but we ended up making love on the operation table.” "Yes, I tested it's functionality quite thoroughly."

Sæþór

Tftc!

SDCard

Thanks for the chapter!

D

So, full elementals are the magical version of a boltzman brain? Pitty viv cant just communicate in conzepts to explain to the lady what she has become and how her fragmentation makes her a... kinda monster... unintentional as it is. Its not like viv ever was in the in between and talked that way, right? XD

Balaji Dutt

"The way the face frowns" -> "The way the face frowned" would be better I think.

lenkite

Fighting against a OP mass of mana like the Azure Lady - I think she should try develop [Nullification] aspect of black mana. Nullify all the blue mana in those clouds and waves so they just become plain physical matter.

lenkite

> Viv’s hyperbeam dissipated the sword. With a cry, Fantos parried high, where Viv had been aiming. The blade cut through her spell. How did a dissipated sword parry and cut through which spell ?

Doleo

The domains are kind of confusing to me, on one hand the shorter and more refined a Dragons name the more powerful they are, but I'd assume gods with more domains/aspects are more powerful but they might just have more concentrated power if they have less. Like Entikku's only domain is Death I believe and in Viv's elemental ascention her soul was smaller than spider god lady's but way more powerful.

Doleo

I like the entropy aspect. Stuff like Famine, Wither, Fade, etc

Doleo

She's the god of Power and Order, not slaying I thought. She slayed plenty of gods already though so I doubt killing a newborn weak god is good for Power. The conflict I can see happening is her champion pursuing Power by gaining control over Param or his apparent hatred of mages and the evil overlord viv persona causing initial conflict.

RonGAR

NEW SPELLS??? Yesssirr I'm here for all of it! She did her 'knife, sword, and guillotine bit'; it was very "Medieval" of her. Time to Modern day her spells. BLaCk Mana Missiles, Lasers and Atomic's. Or go 'Natural', with, USe the 'aspect of change' on some animals and insects and turn them into her creature or temporary monsters or forge them out of Black/Shadow mana itself. For example Black mana snakes/tendrils. Black mana Swarm, Or do BM FLood, BM Rain, BM Wind, OR go for the ultimate source of black mana. Space itself. BM Void space, BM Black HOLE OR just go where she seems to be going anyway. More mixture of Elemental and Dragon. First Human Elemental Black Dragon. Finally get those 'wings'!

RonGAR

Right... time to go nuclear.

Szelanaya

I'm kinda starting to wonder if Viv is going to end up in situation where she ends up conquering the continent, whether as a precursor to showdown with the other Outlander, or in response/clean up to his invasion.

Senko

I think the issue here is she imposed her societies traditions on someone who was part of another kingdoms envoy without it. That's the kind of thing that leads to wars so even the societies that don't care about consent do care about consequences. The azure lady is so far gone to elemental form she can no longer grasp that's a thing. She didn't even fully pay attention to what was going on till she was hurt. So it's less her forcing Lana to do the trial and more a part of her subconscious saying the mage her needs to take the trial without enough of her present to moderate that thought.

Senko

Really Sidgin what better way to test their functionality.

ARealPerson

Have you ever played portal? I'm going to assume you have because you can't stop me. There are levels where you drop a cube through an infinite portal well until it reaches terminal velocity then launch it. I don't disagree about concept battles being important, especially inside soul space, but there's something to be said for a heavily enchanted stone obelisk being portal cannoned at enemies at terminal velocity. Especially if they can rig up some kind of vacuum chamber or aerodynamic enchantment.

Jonathan

A deep unease felt Viv’s chest. A deep unease suffused Viv’s chest. Does thou not seek the same thing?” Not a typo or mistake, but while 'seeketh' would be to far to my ear, I definitely feel a 'Dost' at the beginning of that sentence. “I thought you wanted to stay with this ship for safety reasons?” the ship Errand figments of strength Errant Fantos unsheathed a ling saber long saber “Fuck you feelings, you insane bitch. your Astra explosions sent shockwaves coursing through the cloud mist, Astral? spells that could actually take down the sort of entities that would be a real threats. either be real threats, or be a real threat.

Jonathan

I would agree that Viv needs to figure out more about the limits of black mana. Seeing that darkness and the abyss helped her in the fight, there are definitely more aspects than just change and destruction she could use. I think she knows shadow already, but we've also seen there's obfuscation and void too. If she's going to become more elemental or try to work the black mana aspects into her godhood then it'd be good to have an aspect that is constructive, like maybe void is "potential" and change is "adaptation". Already she uses black mana for portals which is tunneling through space, which could be "connection" and shadow could be "protection". I definitely think both elemental and godhood both depend on metaphoric battling so it would help either way.

Jonathan

I've been wondering if her godhood is actually Maranor's backup plan since her husband ran away. She's the goddess of "slaying" and "power", only nominally the queen of the pantheon. If she "slayed" a new goddess of rulership to seize her "power" that seems like a metaphysical act that would extend her influence in the world. That or maybe puppet her champion to kill Viv as she's ascending to maintain "order" against the "change" of a new goddess and Viv's luck/chaos qualities.

ARealPerson

I think the most powerful spells will be based on change. The exact limits of the meanings aren't always super clear (Intentionally I think so that Mechanimus gives himself some wiggle room.) but In this fight I was thinking that the best way to deal with a blue elemental might be to turn as much water as you can into hydrogen and oxygen then light it up. I'm not sure how well that sort of thing would work but the concept seems interesting.

Dipped In Butter

Haha brother, we were talking about Mecanimus and Void Herald (another very successful author) traveling together last week

Diego Rossi

Don't say that, it is over only for today. We will always be there for the next chapter.

Diego Rossi

Not all societies care about consent.

Young Youghurt

At this rate next tier of spells will be named like Deus Ex, Genesis, Tombstone, (Deluge could have been for blue elemental), Delenda est, Malleus, Recession, Devolution, Purgatory.

BelligerentGnu

Really well done, the Azure Lady felt like threat she should be.

Isley

good chappie

M. Lampi

She frowned, such a hyman gesture. ==> She frowned, such a human gesture.

tr13ze

Thanks for the chapter 😁

Leviathon251

There better be an ICBMM inter continental black mana missile. Lol

ShivaMcTimber

TYFTC! A good scrap!

Tsorov

such a hyman gesture. -> such a human gesture.

Roombot

An excellent meal

Roombot

TBH there might still be, I don’t think the Azure Lady saw this as anything more than a child’s tantrum — despite being the one who was totally in the wrong, lack of consent and all

Roombot

I can’t wait to see the new heavy ordnance she cooks up

Andrew

Thank you!

Sharon S

Do you want grammatical corrections or should I mind my own business? I think most native English speakers have trouble with second person singular (thee/thou or tu /toi). You were inconsistent with its usage and verb conjugation and if you want, I would go over the specifics in the dialogue.

Oskatat

Yeah, I was thinking since last chapter that black seems like the most human of the colors, or at least the one best suited for staying connected to people. Even more so than white. Secrets (the 'hiding' part that Viv had so much trouble with), change, and destruction are a part of life, and intelligent life, much more than anything else. Going into some kind of seclusion sounds like it would harm her understanding rather than expand it. And she might be walking the path to godhood rather than full elemental anyway, whether she wants to or not. She can be the queen rather than Maranor, with Efestar and Neriad at her side. Sorry Sidjin, better get cracking on that godhood status too. The lady is moving up.

Talion

Works now. Thank you!

Kennyevilmonkey

Chapter was tasty, thanks for the food.

Mantarok1205

Jolly good!

James Faulkner

Oh hell yes, I’m so excited to see her come up with new spells!!

Dipped In Butter

Mec & Void earlier this week: https://c.tenor.com/QLvltOQ58hoAAAAC/tenor.gif

Mecanimus

It's already overrrrr

Mecanimus

I reuploaded

Dipped In Butter

Great chapter, look forward to the rest per usual. Not sure if you're still out and about with Void, but hope you goofballs are having a good time

The Bandersnatch

Guess... there won't be a trade deal then

Dylan Sutton

Welcome back

Isiah Debarros

She also made a good point with her personality her change is more focused on human society

Unwillingmainer

So, that's what happens to elemental mages as they age and grow, they become less and less human and more and more their element. And start to see everything as below them and to be used and discarded as needed. Viv is going to have to fight to keep hold of her humanity as she grows. Good thing Arthur and Solfis are going to live a very long time too. And that Black can always change. Either way, great chapter and look at one of the other old monsters out there.

Talion

Same here. Gives a decoding error.

Julian

Can't open the epub again.

WarStrider72

Thanks foe the awesome chapter boss!

Daniel Dante

Thanks for the chapter


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