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Changeling Collection 5: 52 - 57 AND ERRATA
🕑 Added 2024-08-28 07:09:09 +0000 UTCI made a series of mistake that needed corrections so here they are lised.
Ragnarok called Nestra's Aszhii form her true form in the sword king arc. This was a mistake.
The list of people who know what Nestra is has two mistakes: 1, Camille was forgotten in the 'knows she's a gleam' category. 2, Shinran knows she's an Aszhii.
I elaborated that Ragnarok lets Nestra go to Zurich because she knows there is a core problem with her since normal transformation gleams are still gleams when untransformed. This was more a clarification.
Last but not least, Ragnarok called Nestra's cookies Hallongrottor while I described them as having strawberry jam. Hallon means raspberry. It is a mistake that Ragnarok would obviously never make so I fixed that too.
Comments
Étourdie
Thank you! Funny side note: I use tts to listen to stories, for some reason it seems to have decided that for changeling only, every short sentence must be read in a French accent
PickledTink
Are collections 1-3 available? I couldn't find them.
Aifhwinx
hopefully before release on RR yeah. there is also possibly something that needs an edit or addressing in the earlier chapters too. Nestra early on mentioned that people didn't know what happened when you stayed in a portal world when it closed, and then now we have the thing with Claire where apparently they do know what happens, just not the process
Denva
Mec needs to edit that.
Aifhwinx
I just finished a whole re-read, he is aware, he's the one who told Mazingwe, and in part 28 he said: “Oh. Oh, thank you… hey, first friendship between an alien and a human!” (talking to her after Nestra said she wouldn't eat his core cause they were friends). I'm unsure if he knows the name of her species, but he is aware she is not just a gleam
Denva
Doesn't Valerian know she is an alien?
Aclys
well who knows, maybe the raspberries mutated and became a deadly magical plant beast. Good point about her being old enough to potentially have learned about the berries and the bees before the magic and portals became a thing
Exandra
Ragnarok is first gen. It might be that the language diluted so strongly that raspberry is a synonym for strawberry. But in my opinion the likelihood a person who grew up with raspberry’s will probably not use a different term for something that still exists. (as far as I remember the apocalypse only affected fauna. So the only reason why raspberry’s no longer “exist” is, because there is no one left to grew them artificially.)
NoReTr3aT
Either I'm blind, or there is no collection for 23-41.
Aclys
I mean, one: you can make Strawberrygrottor if you want, its not a crime. And two, maybe with the apocalypse hitting no raspberries survived and so now everyone just calls them strawberries cause that's all that remains?
Jamarr
Thanks!
crownfall
I was wondering about shinran not knowing she's an azshii. I love the multicultural blending on the new continent with wolf lady and shinran and all what have u. really cool and great job author
JHD
Glad you fixed the unacceptable cookie mistake 😋
StarWolf
Thank you!
