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The Calamitous Bob 211: They Who Killed an Empire

🕑 Added 2024-08-17 10:02:08 +0000 UTC

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ManguKing

This whole time I expected that harrak had found a way to create demigods, and that's why the actual Gods stroke them down. Bummer that it was just a mad scientist on an ego trip

Axavia

For readers: I’d suggest listening to “Begin Again” from the Fallout New Vegas soundtrack during the discussion in the ziggurat. It makes the emotions hit all the harder.

ARealPerson

“Who the fuck stole the Chalice?” I'll tell you who. It was the league of lesser evil!

Jeanean

Why waste the giant floating rock on a magic school if you can make it a flying fortress?

JLM

As a wise man once said, the difference between a villain and supervillain is... presentation. Haha.

JLM

Baran: Invades Harrak Harrak: The practice targets for our newest flying rock / battleship are just on time.

Balaji Dutt

I believe @Caleb Bear is correct - it should be "Dragon Slayer". From Chapter 181 - Slayers: "You have acquired a new title: Dragonslayer (merciful). This replaces monster slayer. A chiding mother, you have chosen the path of mercy. You have seen the child in the monster and stayed your hand. Perhaps your efforts will lead to a better future, or perhaps not. What matters is that you defeated a dragon in single combat and lived to tell the tale. Effect of social skills are enhanced. Effect of intimidation is strongly enhanced."

Robbie Mathieson

Since the chalice is a floating rock. It wouldn't make a lot of sense to turn it into an airship...but perhaps something akin to naxramus or dalaran. It would make sense to have a magic school on a floating island after all.

Andrew

Thank you!

Grumpy Cucumber

Investment or Compound Interest

Fennil

Hmm, powerfull core, maybe a ship, maybe a...tricorn?

Never

That would be a nice spin on it for sure

Sæþór

Tftc!

Retroburn

Yeah, that would make Irao at least 300 years old. He's old, but not that old.

Clifton

Continuity problem. The Outlander who created the Hadals apparently appeared a century and a half before Viv, which would be a century and a half after the deadlands were created. How does Semeryss know about them? Chapter 28 for the first mention when Farran tells Viv about Irao.

Clifton

I dunno, this seems funnier from the outside perspective - how did the giant floating rock disappear?

ItWasIDIO!!

Yknow I read it & then I read it again the dean pulled Ashra just 🤜🏾🤛🏾

Marian Ch

It's not proper evil until it has either lava-pouring skull fortress or she installs monster energy lights everywhere.

ShivaMcTimber

Hahaha Such a classic

SkySeeker

...but the chalice from the palace broke. Now the pellet with the poison's in the vessel with the pestle!

Senko

I'm thinking final conflict of the gods and ascension to replace the "dead" one.

Duncan Burke

This was a great arc. I think it was a good decision, though, to tie it up quickly and not drag out the confrontation with Semeryss into multiple chapters. Also, the thing with the Chalice is hilarious. I can't wait for Helock to complain to the Paramese Alliance about it, in which case Viv can claim she took it in lieu of Elunath's assets. And if they offer to buy it back, she can rejoin with "Oops, too late, I've already turned it into a flying battleship". And now that I think about it, Viv's probably going to install the Master Core on her flying ship, isn't she? A flying fortress powered by the death of a civilization would be pretty fucking metal. Very Evil Overlady-chic.

ShivaMcTimber

TYFT AWESOME C! All this epilogue made me think of was The flagon with the dragon Has the pellet with the poison The chalice with the Palace Is the brew that is true

D

Thats the second ascended i meant, champ of the war godess. :)

Matt Cannon

"... Need it for what??? Damn it Judgement you get back here and explain yourself! Need it FOR WHAT!!??" ------------- So Viv, as a user of space magic and someone who has possibly watched star trek, could totally start flying by using a warp drive. Would totally be worth it just to show up Arthur.

Matt Cannon

When she first appeared on Nyil, Viv was level 0. No presence, nothing to draw attention. When she returned, she was an elemental archmage and entered the depths of the ziggurat to go to the room that held the ritual. Viv didn't notice Semerys because she never went down to he room with the master core.

Matt Cannon

"Avarice" is what I'm hoping for. Greed (coveting what others have) feels too simple, and she is doing some innovation like writing consumer protection laws. Gluttony might work since that is taking and holding so many resources that your community is harmed, but Arthur knows better than to do that so long as Viv is there to knock some sense into her.

Lijwent

Or money

zenot funr

I feel like at the end of the chapter he kind of jumped to a conclusion that the chalice was stolen I feel like it would be better written if he were to say something like where's the fuckin chalice gone

Adam Davies

Satisfying end to the arc. Thanks a bunch Meca :)

Bum-Sama

The League Returns! Noice juicy chappie.

Max E Malekzadeh

The Chalice is the biggest sky island above Helock. It was supposed to be unapproachable but it's where Abe lived while plotting his revenge. It's also where Viv was reborn as a black elemental arch mage.

RainbowCatTopHat

The League of Lesser Evil... and Greater Mischief

TheLunaticCo

Or "Plenty".

Desert Yeti

I wonder if Neriad and Efestar quietly encourage worship of Viv just to piss her off.

wanderer117

There is that other outlander who hates mages and conquered that island chain. The shadow islands maybe?

D

Hehe buca, you found it. XD Aliens might still be possible, considering all the outlanders. ^_^

Munirah Hutchinson

I hope not! Capitalism is the super destructive and cruel lol. I hope she just ends up as Wealth lmao

CherMi

There's also unresolved conflict between new gods, Maranor and Emeric at least.

buca117

But can it run Crysis?

Anonymous Person

The Chalice, in addition to being the largest of Helock's floating islands, is where Abe's old hideout was hidden. It's also the single largest floating stone (I can't remember the proper name of the mineral) in Nyil.

Emily Gurnavage

Im imagining a scene where Solfis entrusted this task to his most promising children and then asks them for the after action report and notices the lack of buckets being mentioned and it short circuits him.

Kennyevilmonkey

The League of Lesser Evils

Jackjargon

Might still turn that way!

ItWasIDIO!!

Someone got bucketed if Solfis is involved

ItWasIDIO!!

Umm you know it was just them getting the liches home right the debt is still compounding

Mantarok1205

Jolly good!

ItWasIDIO!!

"You...you don't know about the League!?"

sarvashaktimaan

"This is debt collection, you see. If we calculate the compounding interest according to Hemlockian debt laws again Archmage Elunach's withheld estate, then compare it against the sale of a smaller Island from 130 years ago - scaled for volume - you will see that the numbers add up."

Emily Gurnavage

I mean, some already do lol. But then itll have more legitimacy and be less of a cult and more of a religion. We know the Nemeti Viv took in worship her as a Goddess. Some of the people whose limbs she restored worship her. A few of the Children of the Scale do. Some of the common people/peasants have been mentioned to be worshipping her despite official word being not to do so. If she actually Ascends though she wont have to stop it anymore. Part of it is her saying she isnt comfortable with it, but also she mentioned it would put her at serious odds with the churches and Neriad took some issue with it as well since hes the Empire's patron God and most worship should be going to him. I guess if Viv Ascends though the Empire would change its official patron God to Viv though.

D

Hmm, 3 years time skip? 3 years of nothing to note happening? Considering her spark of luck beeing a trouble magnet and being silent, there must be a shitshow of epic propotions ahead, no? Wonder whats left? - baran being stupid? - dawn lizards trying again? - second ascender going for 'human unification'? - dragon civil war? - old gods going for a rematch? Did i miss any other possible crysis exept the sleeper going all lovecraftian on nil? XD I hope its not the gods honestly, it would mean the final arc...

Emily Gurnavage

Next major conflict is prolly gonna be with that immortal(is he? Immortal or super long lived somehow. Hes over 200 but human after all) paladin that took over that island nation and rules it with an iron fist and brutal laws. Or Baran

Emily Gurnavage

The League strikes again! (Blanking on the full name) I hope they left a calling card of some sort, although that's a bit harder when you steal an entire island.

D

It doesnt matter if you know it was them, what matters is: you cant prove it! Also fifth.

Clifton

Solving the mystery of a stolen floating rock is going to be interesting. And awkward for Helock when they learn that not having a treaty with Harrak in place means they also have little leverage. I can see this being an amusing scene - either as the result of spying or a mic drop at some international summit.

Roombot

I’m looking forward to the day Viv ascends to godhood and people start literally worshipping the empress 😎

Roombot

Ten Internet Points (TM) says Viv stole the Chalice

Denva

The chalice is the floting rock that Abe used to reside in

Never

I really hope when Arthur gets her name down to just a concept shes known as capitalism

mallix

Aww I was thinking Semeryss would become the brain inside the master core

Louisthau

Yoink.

Oskatat

You don't know for sure they did it. You can't prove anything. Fourth

Turean Allen

"A moment for for a saga"

RonGAR

Third!!!

sebsebs

Everytime I read about a room made of flesh I get Worm flashbacks. Didn't expect that 3 years timeskip! Thanks for the chapter, hope Viv will get some wings soon PS: how did Viv not notice Semerrys and vice versa when she was in the capital or when she then returned to discover the ritual had succeeded?

Patrick

I think viv got Dragonslayer (merciful) for beating up Arthur's brother but not killing him

JHD

I second this motion.

Dani Zweig

"the dark skin familiar yet so very enticing" She's Hallurian. Aren't they light-skinned? (Minor point, I know.)

ErrebanRrereban

This was great Mecha! On another note, I finished all of journeybin what felt like one sitting last week, and damn! Part of me is hoping you've quietly been looking up a sequel XD. Thanks as always and keep on being 👌

RonGAR

Massive 3yr time skip... I wonder where VIV is at right now. I mean, look what she was able to do in 3yrs. I hope she doesn't get super friendly with that orb allowing whomever to use it when they please. Sure, she can only get black mana out of it, and they could tap into the rest, but she shouldn't give them endless permission to use it whenever they please. Only in case of emergency and in DEFENSE of Harrak. ------------ Wonder how the 'Dragon Feast' went. LOL And why didn't Judgement stay for it? I bet he wouldn't be so grumpy if he had some 'FISH SAUCE' and ate well seasoned meat! LOLOL -------- Viv seems to have turned Authur into the daughter Viv's Dad wanted her to be. A smooth politician. Or maybe a used car salesman, if anyone can tell the difference. LOL But yeah It seemed to have made Viv Sad. --------- Nice rundown of all of VIv's accomplishments. I see you didn't put, 'WINGS" on that list. LOLOLOLOLOL But its been 3 yrs, I wonder if she FINALLY grew them. ANd if so what 'STEP' she is on right now. ----------- Hmmmm What is the importance of the 'Chalice' again? Does anyone know? Either way, its about time Helock paid up. They owed a debt after all. Bunch of scumbags. (But doesn't that make one more nation mad at her?)

RepossessedSoul

Might want to do a ctrl F to remove the Nestra/Viv mistakes and the Semeryss/Emeryss issue.

wanderer117

Tallit drank the curve of tenured black mana professor Ashra’s waist, suggested edit Tallit's gaze drank in the curve of tenured black mana professor Ashra’s waist,

NoReTr3aT

Well, that means that new Harrak has fully claimed old Harrak and all(?) current disasters the Alliance was made for are gone. Guess it's time for either an external threat or inner-continental politics. The next chappy starting with an another PoV to bring everyone up to date after the timeskip would be nice.

Quex

Amazing finish to this arc. Tyftc!

Davan Krueger

With the tag of Bob at the bottom sometimes foreshadowing is obvious

Brandon Yarberry

*cackle*

Red Viking

Yesssss!!!

Jeanean

Well, seems like the flying castle is a GO!

Shimelton

If you can’t have an orbital strike platform then an atmospheric strike platform is the next best thing!

Elaine

good chappie

william wallace

I demand a flash back from the league of lesser evil stealing the floating island.

Caleb Bear

"I almost died from poisoning, yet found and adopted a baby dragon after slaying and consuming her sibling with a mage path and an old knife."

lenkite

"Viv let Emeryss take her time"

BramBora

It does sound more like Nesta then Viv

WarStrider72

Was it the League? Wouldn’t they have put a bucket over something’s head?

Kota

Didn't she ask Nous about this, and they replied Viv may have defeated, but never *slain* a dragon, so she can't have the Dragonslayer title?

Nopret

Pretty sure Dragonsyer is correct. She got it for raising Arthur and because nous thought it was funny

Nopret

Look at that Abe got his home back

BelligerentGnu

So much epic in this chapter I'm surprised it didn't burst. That said, that is one weird non sequituer of a time skip.

Dean Sharpe

Um, it's not stealing if Abe already owned it. Flying ships yo!

Leviathon251

Thanksyou!!! Nice way to wrap up the arc!

tr13ze

Thanks for the chapter 😁

WarStrider72

Woot! Thanks for the chapter boss! Time to read with my morning coffee

SDCard

Thanks for the chapter!

Jonathan

Judgment to Viviane, talking about the Master Core: "Keep it secret. Keep it safe."

Federico

“I don’t need to do shit,” Nestra stated, more for the record than because she really meant it. “However, for a less stupid resolution to this conflict, I’ll accept your request.” There is an error: Nestra. It should be Viv

Caleb Bear

Mostly, she revealed ‘Dragonsyer "Dragonslayer" Arthur was one of the last ones, joining the tale of the flight. "Tail" Whatever golden radiance ad caressed the capital was gone now "Had" blue opening in the cloud cover and the dragon, but they were a "Dragons" if she were even more detached from mankind as the Azure Lady Mankind "than" the azure

PickledTink

---- “Who the fuck stole the Chalice?” ---- The League of Lesser Evil strikes again!

Ryan

Theres a few spots where you said the name "Nestra" presumably referring to Viv, and a couple Emeryss instead of Semereyss

Tsorov

revealed ‘Dragonsyer’. -> Dragonslayer

Julian

Well deserved monologue. I wonder which continent will be conquered with the master core.

Szelanaya

What an ending lmao

Marian Ch

League of Lesser evil strikes again, grander than ever!

Oblique

Ahhh, worth the wait.

benjamin ireland

There's a bit where you wrote Nestra instead if Viviane lol

Mecanimus

Ok I uploaded a new file.

Mecanimus

Ok I uploaded a new file.

Julian

I am once more asking for a new epub.

Dee

Looking forward to this chappy but I see that the epub isn’t working in Apple Books—opens up as a single blank page. :(

Mecanimus

PS: she's currently two landmarks away from completing the Ascender step of her path. I will change the notifications to reflect this when I clean the documents. Sorry for the inconvenience.


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