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Changeling Part 61

🕑 Added 2024-09-23 15:12:25 +0000 UTC

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lenkite

Umm..all those techs know about her hidden identity since everyone was calling her Crescent...and her residential address would say Nestra lives here.

SunderGoldmane

It’s probably stuck in her carpet somewhere

SunderGoldmane

But the mom doesn’t

A Materen

Now he's lots of parts of an organization XD

Smaug

I would really really really, not be comfortable with a cannon that can turn me into tomato sauce before I can react being autonomously controlled by a computer. These things have backdoors, they can be hacked and shiet! Gidung could just send some tiny stealth drone and I don't think even Sereth could bail you out fast enough.

gray matter

Sareth wouldn’t let it get anywhere that’s his stated job. While I love the naval gun solution I’m surprised this wasn’t a Sareth solution. The enemy was B rank and wanted to use technology to source her blood. He already intervened on B ranks who found her blood

gray matter

Yes, which was dumb, if Crescent was attacked, why would she inform her mother? I mean unless you are planning on Sareth pretending to be Crescent at the same time Nestra is seen, her cover is entirely blown here. Even then her identity is known by the Americans unless you’re going to try and convince me they sent nothing back about Crescent being Nestra to their organization which isn’t believable. That’s the only out I see. Otherwise the part about her messaging her mother needs to be deleted at the very least. There’s a lot of identity shenanigans I think got mixed up in this chapter. For example her casually chatting on the phone with Stibs who’s referring to her as Nestra when it seems she was being Crescent. Same with what’s his face who wouldn’t make that mistake because she would’ve called him with the Crescent phone

Elayda

Chekhov’s Naval Point Defence Cannon

crownfall

shinran knows she is an azshii + ragnarok called her both crescent and nestra in this scene

pipMcDohl

Rangarok

NoReTr3aT

Oh shit, you're right.

NoReTr3aT

Because they raid for the little people that get fucked if the shitty portals aren't raided.

Christoph Seidl

I can't put my finger on why but I do love this entire story so far. It's really hard for me to wait for the release of the next chapter, I am checking almost every day "just in case" one is released earlier.

AgentFransis

Fucking around and finding out, Naval gun edition.

StarWolf

Nestra and Helen’s guild name is little people? So I thought they were being literal.

Clifton

Why would it be short?

Clifton

Definitely it'll be an arc. He's part of an organisation, after all. Well, was.

Daemion

I wonder, are the techs, Shinran and Ragnarok still in Crescent's place when she makes her phone calls? Because as gleams they could totally hear the other side of her conversation, too... and that means Shinran would then know that Crescent is Nestra. I mean, if he hadn't figured it out yet. Her mother is sending a car. Which means when it arrives someone is going make the Palladian connection. Also, what is Nestra going to tell her family? She was attacked because she can transform but her family knows that she can't. And this is going to be a high profile scandal, not something she can hide forever.

RageBone

Crescent can very well be recorded. It takes Nestra active thought but it is an important part of her cover as well, because if she is known as the magically unrecordable one, all those weird glitch incidents on her adventures fall back onto her.

Sgt. Tibs

Ragnorak was the one who tricked her into meeting them in the first place and now she tried to take the only thing that saved her smh. Another reason to be on team Shinran, he saved her gun.

StarWolf

Just to make sure I am tracking. 1.78 is above average height. It’s not short. Or in Nestra’s universe, with magic affecting people, 1.78 is now short? For American that is 5’8, definitely above average height for females.

Enif

Lol I guess not. I was thinking of the "Hot-shot" scene when she had to say Sea-wiz twice.

Mecanimus

Sorry should be corrected now.

Mecanimus

I... did a Dredd reference? lmao

Mecanimus

Is typo sorry. It's my bad.

Mecanimus

Nestra's around 1.78. Helena is still growing a bit and it looks like she's be taller.

Mecanimus

Yes they were destroyed under Shinran's authority.

Mecanimus

It's need destroyed yes. They brought the techs to protect her.

Mecanimus

Nestra sent her mom a message.

Adam Davies

Oh wow, i was ready for that asshole to be a whole arc, but this is waaaaaaaay more satisfying. Thanks :)

Terra Medlock

Just as the forefathers intended

Federico

The "jig" can continue. What can be discovered is: 1) Nestra and Crescent live together, so from roommates to a romantic relationship 2) Nestra and Crescent, until now, haven't ever be seen together. For this both aren't known to be party animals or have many social interactions outside their job. 3) Crescent isn't seen around. Remember that Crescent can't be recorded and it's likely discovered if someone cares by simply doing/searching a video. Some theories that can be made from someone that don't have the full story: 1) users without cores can transform. Unlikely because only now she can transform, there aren't any connection with her family, she didn't have any external manifestations such as inhuman reflexes. 2) she is a super government assasin/agent/operative. Here is a timeline: born without a core, but with everything else -> schooling as a top tier user -> years in one of the top police forces, as a cqc specialist -> wounded in action -> first operation (?) -> dismanted her unit -> some weeks pass, likely training -> first test, fighting the cyborg gangsters -> surviving the breach -> Crescent start to exist as a lap dog of Ragnarock -> the corruption case -> a near tpk -> sect mission -> secret mission in china -> operation in switzerland and the train attack -> americans that try to kill her. Obviously the naval cannon is a cover up, since a light user would be too quick to be targeted with such a weapon

Aifhwinx

oh, they are definitely toxic, nobody who'd push someone they supposedly care about to follow through with an engagement from love-bombing is anything but. and the functional disownment for defiance is just the shit icing on the cake there. the thing with choosing terms is I believe a neurological quirk I have, I probably didn't need to go into it because yeah most people get it, but it's just a little itch about differentiating reasonable assumptions and known facts, and word choice which keeps nipping at me. daniels group I'm like 95% sure is religious from how they talked, and 100% on them being fundamentalists from their focus and his little rant this chapter about 'purity'. the grandparents I'm 100% on them being shitty-flavoured religious, and like 90% on them being a flavour of fundamentalists

Aifhwinx

truly devious, nestra is cursed to be targeted no matter her identity :P

AntiClimax she her

Her grandparents were extremely religious, high-control, and practiced shunning. While you are correct that at this point it is technically incorrect to call them fundamentalists, since that technically refers only to groups that 'go back to the fundamentals', most people (even me, a former fundamentalist) just use the term to refer to shitty-brand religious that care more about their religious rules than they do about other people (including their family). There's enough overlap, that I think it's a fair use of the word, even if another descriptor would be more technically correct. I agree that we shouldn't jump to the conclusion that her grandparents are part of the same religious group (who I don't have enough evidence to know if they are fundamentalists or just supremacists or dominionists or what). But it's pretty obvious that whatever their particular beliefs, they have the same toxic flavor as the US religious far right.

AntiClimax she her

By that metric she was also targeted by Sereth for being Aszhii! :0

Aifhwinx

it's already been fixed, may need to refresh page, and the email will still show the typo, but it was fixed

Aifhwinx

yes, and a reasonable leap is still not confirmation. making guesses and predictions is fun, and as i mentioned, i think it's likely both from in narrative clues and meta-narrative clues. but for now saying they are religious fundamentalists is incorrect, all we have is that her grandparents are shitty-brand religious more concerned with image than family. which sadly still maps to a large percentage of non religious-fundamentalists. I'm expecting from a meta-perspective for it to turn out her grandparents either are part of the same group as Dr. Daniels was, or were part of a precursor group if they are dead, but I'm not about to say they definitely are yet. given recent revelations and story events i'd even bet on us having confirmation in short order. TLDR: I just don't like conflating 'X is likely' and 'X is true'

Aifhwinx

the name drop at least looks to be a typo, it's already been changed to crescent in the text, and otherwise yeah, the home is the place that most blends her identities, but IIRC it's like on-the-books as crescents, it's an issue because like... her mom knows where it is and has it tied to nestra, and if she mentions the address to someone who knows crescent's address the jig is up

Aifhwinx

in a sense Shinran targeted her for being aszhii, just not with intent to murder :P

Mantarok1205

Jolly good!

Ecthe

Actually the zealots only knew Crescent. They had no idea that she was Nestra.

Tjolbin

“This is a ship weapon, Nestra, albeit an antique one. Why do you even have this here?” Ragnarok calls her "Nestra" in public, with multiple people presumably paying attention to the conversation. Maybe its intentional, but it doesnt seem that way.

Deepal

The baddies were taken care of nicely, love the action, even the Allfather got wasted off screen last chapter, lol. I think this particular cult will come after her again.

AntiClimax she her

I don't think they're planning on raiding with Sashimi, at least when other people are involved. It's been mentioned that Sashimi may not appear when Nestra's in her mask, and it's also been mentioned that Sashimi doesn't seem to show up until she's bleeding. Of course, we won't really know until she's been regularly raiding in her mask.

RonGAR

Im sure there is. And thanks to your point, they would overlook not finding it. So it might as well go to Nestra.

AntiClimax she her

I don't think she needs to worry about the blood too much given Ragnarok *and* Shrinran are involved in the investigation and it's in both their interest to protect her identity.

AntiClimax she her

No. At least because Shinran supposedly doesn't know she's Clytemnestra Palladian, and Ragnarok supposedly doesn't know she's Ashzii. Also the look they shared implied that they didn't, at least until that moment.

Niko

Do ragnarok and shiran know that each other know nestra’s real identity?

AntiClimax she her

It's hilarious how spot on Gorge's quip was. Door-to-door missionary Kaiju? As B class, he may as well have been a Kaiju, and he was absolutely a missionary. Also, are there any of her identities that she hasn't been targeted for? Cop, Palladian, Demon? I suppose she hasn't been targeted specifically for being Ashzii yet.

SerIcouldntcareless

I dont know why, but your books are amazing !!!

gray matter

It became her azhii Den and was bought using off the grid funds, I’m pretty sure she only uses it as Crescent. She didn’t go there after Shinoda burnt down her apartment because that was Crescents place and she was being watched I believe. The only thing that should link Nestra to that place is the naval gun. Either way, if it’s Nestra’s place she would never enter or exit it as Crescent and the Americans wouldn’t have found here there if they were looking for Crescent. And if Crescents place and Crescent was attacked she shouldn’t let her mom know because Crescent has nothing to do with Nestra

AntiClimax she her

She hissed at the techs. Pretty sure she was both attacked and present for the investigation as Crescent.

gray matter

No she is hissing and using Azhii moves, she was attacked as Crescent.

AntiClimax she her

Is there a core left to take?

Daemion

He's standing in Nestra's home, Ragnarok used her name and I'm fairly sure Nestra's not going to meet her mother as Crescent, so she most likely changed back to her human self. If he still doesn't have a clue, then he's beyond help.

michael pigott

They don't just have, "religious" parents. They have "total disownment because the mom backed out of a "traditional" marriage with an assumed total abandonment of ambition to be a housewife" parents. They're not confirmed to be this flavor of fundamentalist but its not a huge leap

Owen Taylor

I thought she was in her human form. I thought the slip was calling her Crescent, not the other way around.

Owen Taylor

I think she was attacked as Nestra. What isn't explained is how the Americans knew that Crescent is Nestra. Both of Shinran and Ragnarok know she is Crescent. Nestra texted her mom herself to tell her, but presumably doesn't tell her why she was attacked, which is supported by Nestra's mom linking it to the train attack.

DrNutella

Ok it realy needs a line about the bloodsample...why isn't she paying attention to it? Did she get it? Destroy it? She knows anyone gets that blood her life on earth is over, why did she allow them to take it? It sounds like she wanted information but that can't be worth everythig she holds dear...

RonGAR

The Core... The B Core. Did she take it????

Aifhwinx

Rongar, yeah it was but it looks like it's already been fixed originally it was “This is a ship weapon, Nestra, albeit an antique one. Why do you even have this here?", which as of this post has been fixed to say crescent, supposedly there were some other mistakes in there but mecanimus is on the ball with it

87894354

You, sir, deserve an internet.

Aifhwinx

we learned her mum and aunt have religious family, religious =/= fundamentalist, so we don't have confirmation that they were fundamentalists. there is plenty of room for them to be such, and from a meta-perspective, it might even be likely since it would slot together neatly. I'm also not sure we have actual confirmation that the zealots here are religious fundamentals, just strong evidence for it so far. it is kind of funny that Nestra keeps getting into fights with fundamentalists though, first the sword kings and now these idiots. I'm halfway expecting her to stumble into another soon

RonGAR

Did Ragnorak really call her Nestra in front of Shinran and the techs??? I'll have to go back and see. Good eye!

Aifhwinx

ragnarok knows that the two identities are the same, but not about the Aszhii, shinran knows about the Aszhii but not that nestra == crescent

RonGAR

I knewwww those zealots were a problem. Didn't I say so two chapters ago when I thought it was them on the train??? Best believe that B'class douche made a bunch of calls about what he 'suspects' Nestra to be, and what to do if he doesn't return, which means. They'll be back. SMGDH. Church and the Good Lord are not the problem. It's just the lunatics turned fanatics in them that are! Still... all that aside. I didn't think we would EVER see those guns used, but Gyyaattt Damn were they effective. 😎🍻 -------- I'm surprised Nestra didn't remind Ragnarok that she was the one that didn't screen these fanatics better, and just 'Force fed Nestra' to them to 'appease' The Americans. I would've been like "This is on YOU!" It wouldn't help, but I bet it would make her feel better to say it. LOL 😉 -------- Hope she still goes to that Garden party with Valerian. He is crushing hard and maybe its time our girl stretches her muscles or gets them stretched 🤭 --------- Nice family bonding moment with mom and Helena. And Kudo's to Shashimi for making the flag! She'll be proud. But, don't know how Helena and Nestra are planning on hunting with Helena's school mates with Shishimi there. I guessing 'seperate' teams once they have enough numbers, and hire one or two C class vets as backup and to chaperone to keep things running smoothly. I know Nestra knows a few C-class vets looking for work from her jobs with Ragnarok. --------- Thanks for the chapter. Till next week.

Daemion

Let's look at the facts. The warehouse was bought/rented under Nestra's name back when she was doing illegal raids as part of Seth's training, Crescent didn't exist yet at that time. Correct me if I'm wrong please. Despite the protection given to masked gleams, the two zealots somehow found her home. Outside of an encrypted database there should be no record that Crescent is Nestra. Easiest explanation: They followed her because she wasn't careful enough. That would explain why Seth didn't intervene, this was the consequence of her own actions. Or maybe he knew she was safe and would have simply stolen the blood sample later. Both Shinran and Ragnarok know that Crescent is Nestra, correct? Shinran knows about Seth, too. Both are present at the scene, which makes the whole thing a really big deal. I guess Nestra texted her mom, she didn't find out on her own. And since the warehouse is Nestra's official address, she knew where to send the car. This is all problematic: The secret of Crescent is out in the open now, it won't take long until people know that it's Nestra in disguise. Which will raise uncomfortable questions, like "How did you become a C-rank raider without having a core?", which will in turn reveal her other secret.

matt

Nestra went full Burt. Awesome.

Clifton

We recently learnt that her mum and aunt had fundamentalist family who may or may not have survived. There is real potential for knotty and complicated situations with her identities overlapping in the future.

william wallace

There is a sick part of me that thinks Nestra should scoop up a bit of the ‘leftovers’ and put it in a jar and send it to the Americans. Maybe with a nice note saying ‘I was thinking of you, and thought you’d like some jam, I made it myself’

AntiClimax she her

My thought is less that they'll be main antagonists (though I'm sure they'll continue to be out to get her and may indeed be a main antagonist), but that their snooping will cause Nestra's identity to become known before she's ready. I'm a little worried that this incident will cause that given how entangled her identities are with her home. I'm not sure whose name it's under, but much of it is definitely being paid for by Crescent. And her Mom is apparently picking her up there, and Crescent was attacked there. Not sure how she's getting out of this one.

Oblique

Uh, Im not 100% sure if the building is under nestra or crescent actually.

Oblique

'Inevitable return call from a certain message' she let her mother know herself. I think probably because her two identities are very poorly separated qt this point. Nestra lives in that building officially. There was an incident. The mom would probably find out anyway.

Simon Hoerder

My mental calendar has it arrive sometime between going to bed on Tuesday evening and waking up on Wednesday morning. But I was looking through my mail archive of Patreon notifications and it seems to have fluctuated a bit during the last couple of weeks. Hence why I phrased my comment a bit vague. (I was too lazy to check back any further.)

gray matter

I don’t think Nestra is linked to that flat it was paid for with Crescents money and linked to her. She is actively being Crescent here. If it was Nestras flat she would’ve changed back, but then also why would the Americans be there they weren’t looking for Nestra. If that flat is Nestra’s and Crescent is there and was attacked by the Americans and her mom knows then her entire identity is blown in this chapter and I don’t think that was the intention. I think some of the identity things in this chapter need to be reworked. I did love the zealots getting massacred

Marsharbour

Crescent was attacked, in nestra’s flat.

steamrick

The nominal time is late tuesday evening (UTC-0). That's wednesday early morning in Hong Kong, I think?

Jèššé Höwârd

Hahahahhaha I used to work with the CIWS system and that was an amazingly fun surprise to see it.

Cormac

Should it really be Crescent? I got the impression it was a slip by the character, not the author.

gray matter

How does her mom know she was attacked? Crescent was attacked not Nestra. What am I missing? She is actively dealing with Ragnarok and Shinran as Crescent and her family is sending a car?

Cormac

This is a great copypasta.

steamrick

That's going to be the real question because the place should have her civilian name on the deed.

steamrick

Might have been deliberate by the author as a slipup by Ragnarok. I mean - sure the techs overheard, but it's not like Nestra isn't on the paperwork for the building, so it's becoming more and more of an open secret anyways.

Aifhwinx

somehow I doubt this will be the last we see of the zealots, not those two again mind, but if that supremacism is the norm amongst their group nestra will probably be getting harassed by them for a while. wonder if instead of Nestra's family we'll be dealing with them as some of the antagonists against her Aszhii self when it eventually comes out. and as others pointed out potential typo having Ragnarok call her Nestra in front of Shinran and the techs overall, enjoyable chapter, the guild founding got slightly overshadowed by Chekhov's naval cannon, but I'm excited to see how that goes, Nestra continues to contribute to the public good via violence

ItWasIDIO!!

Very American I believe they would approve if they weren't supremacist zealots

Doctor Zero

They should call themselves The Worst Guild. Pays the worst, takes the worst jobs, and have the worst interpersonal skills.

Lucy Severine

They thought she was crazy for using a Naval Cannon Broadside as home defence. They were wrong! AHAHAHA!

Adurna

I love the bragagrt instantly reined in by "Yes, mom."

Louisthau

BRRRRRRRRRRRRRT

Daemion

I hope Shinran makes sure that Nestra's blood sample gets disposed of. Wouldn't want to let that fall into the wrong hands.

c c

Simply delightful!

Simon Hoerder

At least it's not a big cliff-hanger. And I'm gonna join the chorus of naval gun lovers. :-D

Simon Hoerder

Thanks for the chapter. But I thought Nestra comes mid-weekish? Is the schedule changing or do we have to wait extra long for the next one?

TheLunaticCo

I hope she destroyed the samples and whatever tech was being used to analyse them. Hopefully it wasn't being fed to an off-site backup.

StarWolf

UGH! We have to wait another week for a chapter!? How many chapters can you write if we go to 20 a month? Or 20 a week? I mean you don't need sleep right? :D Either that or I need to stop reading for a few months and then have 8-12 chapters to read. Serious question: How tall are Helen and Nestra's Human form?

Young Youghurt

Own a naval gun for home defense, since that's what the founding fathers intended. Two ruffians break into my house. "What the me?" As I grab my shiny armour and claws. Draw my window maker on the second man, miss him entirely because it's smoothbore and nails the neighbor's dog. I have to resort to the cannon mounted at the top of the stairs loaded with grapeshot, "Tally ho lads" the grapeshot shreds the two men in the blast, the sound and extra shrapnel evaporate two next blocks. They puree waiting on the police to arrive since their bodies changed from solid to mushy state. Just as the founding fathers intended.

WickedlyDesigned

Shinran calling Nestra by her name is either a typo or a revelation. And I am pretty darn interested in how the Americans figured out her address, given the protections awarded to masked gleams.

Enif

Yeah!!! Checkovs CIWS finally gets it's day! So excited we got to see that. Also nice DREDD reference.

Ricky Kukowski

“This is a ship weapon, Nestra, albeit an antique one. Why do you even have this here?” should be Crescent. it happens again a bit later

Ekko

I love the Naval Gun! I knew that one day it was gonna be useful!

jarthur93

thank you for the chapter

Unwillingmainer

Fun to see her forced to learn the human way all while being much stronger as a demon. At least her mom is strong enough to beat it into her thick head. Speaking of her mom beating things into her head, is she ever going to be aloud to live alone at this rate? Fire bombs, attempted assassinations, and now nonconsensual medical procedures means mommy dearest isn't letting her out of her sight for a while. Nestra does know how to make interesting enemies.

Bunny Waffles

Mmm, chunky salsa~. Really though, everyone should invest in surplus high ordinance weaponry for home defense! Intruders can't complain if they are reduced to a nice manageable consistency!

WarStrider72

Early chapter again!

WarStrider72

Woot, thanks for the chapter boss


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