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Eternal Game of the 108, part 1

🕑 Added 2025-05-28 16:28:17 +0000 UTC

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FrozenFingers

Just rememberd that you started this story and I am anxiosly waiting for an update.

Silver21

Love it! You should keep going and write this as your next project😁

Shaoraka

Love it ! I do have a penchant for timeloops (when well done) but this is especially nice, hope you'll pick it up !

ItWasIDIO!!

Eh... don't really like time loops but seems interesting maybe like Journey if you ever go all in ill be forced to read because i like your writing

SunderGoldmane

I was wondering as well. I missed subscribing to BoB and dont want to buy the bob tier if 108 isnt started yet.

SunderGoldmane

I have found myself trying to remember “who writes that one story with the deathloop that was cool?” And “did it have a backlog, cause i want to read more” and then remembering its you and its not backlogged and then im a lil sad.

RandomPerson

Do you have any news about this fiction? I don't want to hurry you but it's been a month of anticipation

Doctor Zero

Very nice. I like it a lot.

J

Normally I don't comment but I want you to know I'm excited for this story if you decide to run with it. Otherwise I'm looking forward to what else you come up with.

NA

Thanks for an interesting read! Interesting combination of seemingly a tabula rasa narrator, or at least one we know very little about so far, reset loop, portal fantasy, and litRPG. In what seems like a magitek setting. This line in particular and the exchange surrounding it in general was the bait that got me: “Sire, the apple asks us if we experience everything in the same slice.” Vaguely reminiscent of Flatland, but with more sass?

UnKeyed

Be honest did you make the MC English before or after deciding to kill them in a bunch of gruesome ways?

Mecanimus

You're correct but they've been mixed since the Renaissance so I'll keep it as is for simplicity.

Mecanimus

Not regularly but I might just dump chapters here and there.

RandomPerson

Hi Mechanimus, all I could think about in the last few days was this opening. Are there going to be regular uploads now?

Atosryac

Good Stuff Just one thing that I have to complain about: Chronos, Titan of Time != Kronos, Father of Zeus They are two different entities with very similar names

Arg

New story replacing Bob? Or coming after changeling?

Muzzlepatch

Excellent! You've caught me already!!

Noah

I totally agree, especially with the LitRPG part.

steamrick

I'd definitely read a time loop story. I can currently count the amount of time loop stories I recommend on one hand: Mother of Learning, Time Braid and The Years of Apocalypse. Everything else is bad or dead. Though I do make one request: Please keep the LitRPG elements to the minimum you can. I am very tired of the genre. Bob was okay, but please please please no more than that.