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The Calamitous Bob 237: The Promised Doom

🕑 Added 2025-03-22 15:23:13 +0000 UTC

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Roombot

TO BE FAIR, Efestar did a lot of evil shit and he was redeemed. So Maranor deserves a chance too. The problem is whether Maranor will ever regret her actions and try to atone for them, or continue being an evil bastard masquerading as a champion of humanity. Plus, letting her be corrupted by the dead god is not a great idea no matter what you plan to do with her.

stephan kour

I wonder if Viv's spell caused the dead god Corruption on Oleander or not. I had the suspicion since Efestar's redemption, considering how freaky changed aspeced black mana spells can be. And how freak abominations are.

Jeanean

Also, the "definition" of LIght/Dark Gods is something along the lines of: They are Dark when their doctrine is purely harmful to sapient civilization. And every god that fights against the Dark gods is automatically a Light god. Its not a matter of Light = good Dark = evil While Maranor is kind of fuckin' racist and not what I would call a good person, her doctrine is not harmful to sapient civilization as a whole, and she fights the Dark Gods. Ergo, Maranor = Light God.

Gwalmeich

The light gods seems to all suffer from some form of PTSD and other mental traumas, some more or less severe than others. They kind of fought against inhuman foes before becoming gods, which has left them in poor mental health. Not that it excuse Maranor of her sins, but it those give a certain perspective to her actions. If you had to fight against monsters as cruel and merciless as the dark gods and their minions for millennias, you too would accumulate a certain amount of psychological baggage.

Tiffany Miller

Ugh Maranor does not deserve to be saved. She anx every priest and follower should be executed shes nothing but a threat with NO redeeming qualities. There is no way she is a light god she's dark all the way.

RonGAR

@Angus 1000% Agree!

Szelanaya

True. But that was back when he was evil. With him changing to the light gods side, his aspects shifted and his color became purple.

a passing Fnord

It was sickly green when he was supplying his power for necromancy when he was still a dark god

Matt Cannon

We are told fairly early on that Emeric has kids. Thats why viv's spark of luck wouldn't immediately stand out.

Matt Cannon

"You must be sure to fire [the big gun] before the lance fires, and you need to [start your attack] within the next two days, or she is lost.” The time limit isn't for firing before the lance fires, it is doing anything within 2 days. I assume because Maradoc is watching Oleander get corrupted and that will have association effects on Maranor. So if Oleander isn't dealt with within 2 days, Khaton will maybe start corrupting Maranor ditrctly?

Matt Cannon

The most recent decisive defeat for the Nemetti cane on land. They FAILED at sra but were not truly defeated at sra. That semantic ambiguity could be used by Meca to allow them to try again. Or.... Theh attack again on land, but forfeit fate magic in favor of some actual tactics, strategy, and logistics.

Clifton

Does he have cats? Because it sounds personal.

Clifton

Ah yes, the good old 'you peed in public, now the whole neighbourhood goes' response. Truly, there are sacrifices for civilisation.

Caitlin

On the note if colors, aren't the roses of blue? Because of Solfis' creator?

Jeanean

Oh well...

AzureMaiden

…I cheated 😅 That particular chapter just went live on RoyalRoad, so I reread it on Friday

Angus Losier

I think, ultimately, this is why Judgement did what he did. He saw that Arthur was growing and learning faster than any dragon before, and this gave Judgement an epiphany. Dragons live a long, long time, but mentally, they normally grow slowly - as shown by the mature but dumb dragons we've seen at least 3 times in-story (Meadow, Arthur's brother Gale, and the big red one Stormrider had kids with). By comparison, humans and other bipeds do *not* grow slowly, either physically or mentally. Judgement realized that by having young dragons interact with the other intelligent races, they could, in theory, all learn and grow at the same rate as Arthur did, increasing their intelligence (and thus strength of will and magical power) far faster than any dragons previously. And he considered this such a fundamentally positive transformation for dragonkind he was willing to die to see it come to pass.

Jeanean

It DID sound like a conversation that was very plausible to have happened at some point... Also, your memory is insane... How do you remember something like that, inlcuding the exact chapter?

Hayden Leech

So Nero is getting warped by Khaton the poisoner right?

Jake Lewis

If you think your weapon system doesn't come with a ramming maneuver, you're just not using it wrong enough

AzureMaiden

Yes, between Viv and Frostway back in chap. 198

Szelanaya

No that's... Sarandel?

Jeanean

Was that actually a conversation that happened?

Jeanean

Wasn't Efestar green?

Domifax

For some reason I always have to think of RA3's giga fortresses when solfi's fortress was describes

AzureMaiden

Maybe, but wasn’t Khaton male?

D

'Mr.Immortal' becoming an abomination and fusing / turning into a vessel for the dead god king who got stuck in a botched reincarnation.

DrNutella

It's that Aberant god Khaton we have heard of before. Oleander is turning into the Avatar of Aberants.

Kota

Better make sure not to talk at the theatre as well. Now that I think about it, didn't Solfis once inquire about making urinating in public a capital offence? So many possibilities...

Kota

Yeah, had me confused as well.

Szelanaya

I thought Efestar's color was purple. In this chapter there are multiple mentions of Maradoc's color being purple, which in previous arcs was blue.

JLM

Every Harrakan made weapon system ALWAYS comes with a ramming protocol

Garrett Kout

What do you mean? How else can you interpret "fire [the big gun] before the lance fires, or else shes lost"? The lance fired, and it fired at the same time as Solfis. It seemed less like the god of secrets giving her tips for how to win, and more like a divination. Why would the god care if it took two solfis beams to break the shield? Theres also the direct POV of Nero succumbing to whatever that corruption was, and Viv and Arthur expressly saying "that mana feels fucked up" at the end. It's not really "off screen".

Roombot

“The thing was, Viv had developed it specifically for something like Oleander or a massive avatar. Or someone really, really rude.” Open-mouthed chewers of the world, be advised. Shut your trap or face the fury of the black-hole-gun.

Roombot

I doubt gods can have children, or else there would probably be some by now

Roombot

What was your prediction?

Roombot

Poor bastard. I was hoping he’d have a better ending.

Roombot

Yeah, Nous confirmed it would happen upon her next path-up several chapters back

Roombot

I think he said you must fire first because, as we saw, when the two weapons collided the shot from Solfis wasn’t quite enough to deflect the lance AND completely break the shield. But Maranor isn’t necessarily lost because the madlad rammed himself into the shield to finish shattering it. The result: Viv got to the temple within the two-day window.

Roombot

So becoming a One-Name is the dragon equivalent of reaching a certain step on your Path, basically? Not an age thing at all, but a strength and significance thing.

Anonymouse

“With a sound like God’s cat pushing His wineglass off the table.” You have such a wonderfully descriptive way with words.

Roombot

It seems one of the gods they killed way back when is resurfacing through Oleander’s wounded soul, and possibly hijacking the connection he has with maranor?

Roombot

I honestly don’t think so. They’re now fated to lose if they challenge her by land or by sea, after losing once with each method. She should still mop them up, but they’re not a true threat. Also: Maranor will need some serious redemption after the bullshit she’s pulled, but fortunately there’s a god for that now… and it would be hypocritical to deny her a chance after giving one to Efestar.

AzureMaiden

“So yes, indeed, your question was within the realm of possibilities. Is there a single Harrakan machine that cannot ram its target?” “Honestly I should make it our design doctrine. All of our stuff should be able to ram their stuff. I mean, I would, but I’m confident it will come back to bite me in the ass in the distant future if I did.” *Morgan Freeman*: It did, in fact, come back in the distant future to bite her in the ass. 🤣🤣🤣🤣

RonGAR

@Senko LOL

Senko

So confirmation from Maradoc the gods can no longer guide Viv by influencing her dreams. They either need to use an intermediary or talk to her directly. When this finishes she is definately joining the gods leaving Avarice to rule Harrak.

Senko

Like a certain dark god who's spent the last few millenia stuck with a botched Resurrection that may have just been handed a suitable corrupted avatar and an open link to the goddess of orders power perhaps?

Senko

Order that has just been significantly weakened and has an open wound to let infection in. If there's ever a time she could be changed or consumed this is it. Like Efester returned to the light.

Sæþór

Tftc!

Senko

True though I'm wondering how Maranors priest hood view their world domination plans at the stage and the rest of the priest hood in Mornmyr. "You cost us our neutrality, our shield, our weapon oh and the avatar you let in is now becoming a dark god. Nice going guys."

Senko

Maybe but i suspect it's a much more specific firing of the lance that was meant. Possibly at the home of the light gods. Otherwise it's too quick and off screeny for her to fall.

Senko

In this case it says black roses on their flag so an error.

Clifton

Bes has had another career change - he's now a Vizier.

Diego Rossi

Thanks for the chapter, creat as always.

Diego Rossi

"The fortress opened its gun ports to deliver a point-blank range volley against the source for good measure, turning the host tower into a much shorter tower. A turret maybe." I dubt there is much of the gun left.

D

True that. :)

Hussar L

I listened to Rohirrim charge scene while reading Paramese Alliance's cavalry charge... it was perfect Also is Maranor in I-can-fix-her list now? I'm curious when the Reptilian Fate magic Empire will be dealt with, are they threat to Viv anymore? Thx for the awesome chapter! After previous chapter (which was perfect) it maintained the momentum well

Garrett Kout

"You must be sure to fire it before the lance fires, and you need to do so within the next two days, or she is lost.”" -> bummer, guess Maranor is lost, guess "Diety in charge of Rulers" spot in the pantheon just opened up...someone with the Genocidal Maniac skill seems like a safe choice.

Clifton

Viv now has an Indestructable shield, so not guaranteed win.

Clifton

Sign of a good author is that they can lead the reader along without it feeling like they're being dragged.

Clifton

I believe it's blue roses on black armour.

Birgitte Pedersen

Great chapter though I thougt we would get a “Viv getting shouted at by Arthur” scene for doing her solo thing last chapter. And weren’t the harrakan knights blue rose? This chapter says black.

Jennifer Leigh

It may just be the [specialness] of patreon formatting, but... The first paragraph is in bold. I believe the first line of Avarice talking is not italicized.

KnightRider007

Ok, was it JUST a coincidence that the chapter published to RR today was the chapter where she talked about establishing Harrakan ramming doctrine (Chapter 198)? The one where she said "it will come back to bite me in the ass in the distant future if I did.” Or are you going to admit this is all going according to your plan...?

Angela Roberts

And here it is but not sure it's biting her in the ass.....

KnightRider007

By bizarre "coincidence", the chapter where she was talking about establishing a ramming doctrine was literally the chapter that went to RR today... “Wow. Am I that predictable?” “Honestly, in some ways, yes. Wasn’t it you who said that it wasn’t about what something was designed to do but about what it could accomplish?” “Hm, that made Solfis weirdly annoyed.” “So yes, indeed, your question was within the realm of possibilities. Is there a single Harrakan machine that cannot ram its target?” “Honestly I should make it our design doctrine. All of our stuff should be able to ram their stuff. I mean, I would, but I’m confident it will come back to bite me in the ass in the distant future if I did.”

Alexander Dupree

This was awesome thanks for another great installment

Angus Losier

I think Crest is better off not knowing that his last ditch effort to save his friend resulted in dooming Oleander to a far worse fate than just dying.

SnowReason

I'm assuming Crest really didn't make it since there was no mention of him in this chapter. Wonder if the remaining Maranorians are feeling it now that the logistics arm is fully down. Kind of expected a bit more dialogue involving him either way TBH.

Tsorov

Avarice is arthur, Vivs not so baby dragon. Yes, they stole a flying mountain. Yes, the god core was the thing that the Harrak ritual produced and which was left under the Harrakan palace. No clue about the dead god, I think it's not Maronar herself, but somebody is using the connection between her and her mortal champion to ursup her place.

SnowReason

Regarding the gun, it was crafted by the Gods so if she can steal it she'll only have the one.

Angus Losier

I'm now picturing a divine harem, with an elevated demigod Sidjin along with Neriad and Efestar all competing for Viv's favor. She couldn't have children as a black elemental, but as a goddess? Could be Arthur gets some *interesting* siblings.

Emily Gurnavage

So thats what was meant by the consequences. Turned him into an abomination and likely an Avatar of some sort.

tr13ze

Thanks for the chapter 😁

Angela Roberts

Viv did think she should make ramming a war doctrine. Looks like she didn't have to, they got it! Such a good chapter!! Definitely rereading. So, Oleander turns into the dead evil god's avatar? And then Viv kills him? But some taint remains I'm guessing to pick the slack from Octas' absence? And what happens to Maranor? They can't die right? So she's reduced AND dark or maybe medium grey? Avarice is so, so right. There's a difference?! Rosea will need handling but I'm betting Bes is up to the task. Viv's ultimate plan is good but it won't be easy! And if she's already halfway to godhood will this be the battle that gets her all the way to God?

Red Viking

Solfis' outrage is just *chef's kiss*

Julian

Yeah right, nothing is ever that simple. I suspect the data gremlins did it.

D

Damn, did i read the flow of this stories foreshadowing that well that i could act like a prophet or did ol'Mecanimus read my comment and was like: yeah cool, lets do that. XD Love it. =D

Mecanimus

Let's stay kind. And the questions were answered without me having to type! Yay!

Robert Rosenthal

To quote the fat electrician it’s not a war crime the first time

Val

Like, have you read the book? Or just skipped a year worth of story?

Mecanimus

Not a mystery I just DLed a new copy and then uploaded it.

Jennifer Leigh

I totally forgot that! Someone said that about the landship, right? Edit: apparently I should have read farther in the comments. ;)

Matt Grayson

Ho HO! Many plots thicken. How wonderful!

Mantarok1205

Jolly good!

Sardeed

Ohhh i loved the first part with how the hunter lady saw Viv and their interacrion. Always a delight to read how native people react to the ober the rop mc of a story. The rest of the chapter was fantastic too.

Sardeed

Because he is entertaining. That is why people love a well written villain more then a boring hero. The greatest sin a character can do in a story is being boring....unless that is his mission, to be boring.

Sardeed

What the heck did come from RoyalRoads and just skipped all chapters in-between and read this one first?! No, like seriously did you not read the last 40 chapters?

Arnon Parenti

Avarice is Arthur. God Core is what destroyed old Harrak and is a sentient mana stone inhabited by the old queen and repurposed as a battery for Solfis. Maranor can't be corrupted, she is literally order, the dead god is the one they used Slayer to kill and let them ascend, like everything else Slayer kills he is stuck in the sword.

Kazith

God this story is so fucking good.

T'Ericka

I did. But I assumed avarice was the “child” back up plan she spoke of if things didn’t go her way when she was fighting with author. I thought she stole an actual chalice - I forgot the floating rock thingy was called the chalice. And what destroyed Harrak was said to be drawing the magic to the the capital. It was never called the god core in the old harrak chapters. A complete reread of the series is clearly in need lol

FuriousDee

I hope that was early enough to follow Marradoc's plan

Nait02

How to know you are an evil Queen? When you measure the cost of repair for your super weapon in weeks of your nations GDP. Bonus points if your super weapon is a sentient flying fortress.

deus vault

wow, that was a great chapter.

deus vault

solfis isn't arrogant. being arrogant implies you think you can do something you can not. solfis is a machine of war. his purpose in existence is to deliver death, destruction and despair to his enemies. I like solfis.

Nait02

The God Core is the thing they found in Harrak city when they looked at the ritual site, that created the deadlands. Avarice is what Arthur named herself. Not sure what exactly is up with Maranor, I assume we will find out next chapter, but it probably did not go well for her that most of her power base got wiped out and her champion corrupted by what is indeed very likely the dead but attempting to revive dark god. They did indeed steal the flying rock from Helock. It happened in the 15 year or so timeskip before the journey to the other continent. The Helockian parts of Oleanders army were rather incredulous when it was revealed. The God Core is basically a mana Core with (near?) infinite Energy. It is what is powering Solfis the sentient flying fortress.

RonGAR

@T'Ericka I got to ask, did read the last 20 or so chapters before this one? Or just 'skim' it? I ask b/c of your questions. All these things were prominently highlighted in the previous chapters.

T'Ericka

Thanks! I didn’t remember it ever being referred to as a god core. And in book 5 it was said that you couldn’t make enchantments on floating rock because the mana there disabled or disrupted it. Thanks for the clarification

Jonathan

Great chapter! See now I'm wondering if Maranor planned this. Like she could probably stop it if she noticed and desired, but I'm wondering how much she actually planned versus took advantage of what she had, since the soul warp would be a secret. Also sacrificing the power invested in her avatar and tainting her image in the eyes of like everyone (especially the god city) would be a big hit. Oleander still has the slayer sword though right? If he gets taken over the dark god can use it safely, which could be a gauranteed win unless it crosses some god mechanics (polluting his/her essence). Though that might be the crux of her downfall too.

RonGAR

Oh boy, Rosea is going to be a problem for later. LOL. Its cute but I get it. She doesn't want ever to be the 'weaker ruler' again. She seen what that cost her once, and doesn't want to pretend that the thought of never conquering all the world wouldn't ever cross Viv's mind. But its cute to think she has a chance. At least not for another 100 yrs or so. ---------------- "What's the difference''. - AVARICE. LOLOL FACTS. There isn't any. If anyone thinks Presidents rule the world and not economics, and the ppl controlling it, then you deserve whats coming to you. LOL As for the other dragons, Power rules, but Wisdom should lead! They all have power, but you could tell none of their education, except Avarice, is higher than that of a middle schooler. I wouldn't say they are 'dumb' but they are ignorant of A LOT of things. A WHOLE LOT! Avarice should start a school...LOL ---------------- FLying LOZengE - LMAO. -------- Solfis losing his shit. LOLOLOL -------- Well... they better secure Morynr's city-sized gun as well, or else Queen Rosea is going to get it, and then each city will have one. LOLOL ---------- All in all, a great chapter. So great, I'm going to read it again to see if I missed anything. LOL

The Bandersnatch

The fact that I'm focusing on Neriad and Efestar's penchant for snarky women who have the potential to kill them... says a lot about me as a person lmao

Kennyevilmonkey

God Core was created by the death of the old Harrak, which turned it into the deadlands. Viv found it in the capital and claimed it as the rightful Empress. It was a whole thing. Avarice is Arthur's true name as a Dragon now. It means she is the best and defacto leader of all the magic clan dragons. The fortress is flying because it was made out of the magical floating rock of the Chalice, which they stole a few chapters and ten in-story years ago. Maranor is losing energy or basically dying, because she put a lot of herself, as a god, on the line with that war, and now to make it worse, her champion is poisoned with corruption and further dragging her down. Viv needs to kill Orlander, or Maranor will die.

FuriousDee

They haven't referred to it as the god core before but they have said that it contains equivalent energy to a god and near infinite energy before and using it is the only way they could build the doom cannon. Avarice became Avarice last chapter just after Viv blocked the slayer. They stole the rock at the beginning of the book I think. There was a diplomatic meeting where Viv had to pay reparations but refused to give it back. Just after this she spoke about using it to build the airship.

Bettafish

From the memoirs of Baron Von Warcrime, "If the vehicle is intact, there's one projectiles left"

Moatdog

I mean to go down ur list ALL of which has been said before Avarice picked her name in the genocidal maniac chapter, they stole the chalice in the chapter right after Killing the advisor in old Harrak capital, and the god core was in the same chapter as the old harrak capital fight. We know the core is a power source fam that was just common sense tho

T'Ericka

No I read all the booms and chapters I don’t recall them referring to it as a god core or explaining what it does only that it killed old harrak. Or when did Arthur’ s name become Avarice? Or when did they steal the giant floating rock?

CentaureHeart

I think you missed the last chapters

FuriousDee

God core was the thing that killed old Harrak. Avarice is Viv's daughter's new name. The fortress was built around the Chalice the giant floating rock after they stole it. Oleander has clearly been corrupted and his connection to Marranor might allow him to corrupt her to.

SDCard

Thanks for the chapter! Glad to see Oleander being dealt with quickly and not just disappearing

T'Ericka

I have so many questions. God core? Who is avarice? Has Maranor herself been corrupted or is this the dead god who was trying to be reserrected way back when? Why is the fortress flying? Did they steal the flying rock from Helock or find a gravitite vein? Is the god core what the necracks were surrounding? What exactly is a god core and does this mean reclaiming the dead lands will be easier?

elijah pickett

Right! That's the answer!

Lucas beck

It's only arrogance if you're wrong

HiddenMaster

omg this made me laugh so much when I went to check it. This is great XD

WarStrider72

And the 100 become Helldivers for a day

elijah pickett

Why do I like Solfis so much? He is like 90% arrogance and I love him dearly🫶

Szelanaya

Nah, the landship and having a ramming configuration.

Ranger Science

Yaaaas. I saw the RR go up an hour ago and started compulsively refreshing Patreon… :D

Julian

For some reason that perplexes me, it now works.

Unwillingmainer

As I said long ago, all New Harrakan vehicles and personal must be prepared to be used as a battering ram at a moment's notice. Per the Empress's degree, if not intention. Also, I love how they already named the crater Lake Solfis. Wonder how many more Lake Solfises this world will end up with?

Andrew

Thank you!

Mecanimus

And now?

Mecanimus

Nope

Julian

Epub doesn't seem to work.

WarStrider72

Agressive negotiations huh?

WarStrider72

Thanks for the chapter boss!

Mecanimus

Incidentally there is a foreshadowing to this chapter in this week's RR chapter.


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