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Chapter 58

🕑 Added 2019-01-16 04:16:19 +0000 UTC

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So I made a small but potentially very clarifying sentence to the last chapter, since it seems that my editor was very confused about when things happened in that chapter and the length of the timeskip. Basically, at chapter start, she is a late five-year-old. Then, after the scene where her mom punishes her, there is a timeskip and she is now a late six-year-old, about 6 3/4. Apparently that was not clear to him. Now hopefully it is. The new paragraph is: "Arlette glanced at her mom and drooped her head. She could still remember the horrors of that day a bit more than three seasons ago, when her mother had ruined her favorite treat for her forever. “...I’m not supposed to do that anymore.”


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