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Chapter 92

🕑 Added 2024-07-08 03:48:55 +0000 UTC

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Eifer

I like Lillian, but I find it extremely difficult to really care and focus on these chapters since the whole Sonya and Chun thing is being hidden like this. It was such a build up and then it just get skipped over or pushed into the future to see some resolution. Feels pretty cheap, not gonna lie.

Jeanean

Not sure what her original power is, but I'm pretty sure Sonya gave Firestorms power to her, maybe even fused it with Lillians powers.

Jeanean

“Good!” Sonya nodded, “Have you at any point before or after acquiring your abilities fantasized or considered using such abilities for a crime?” “Absolutely not,” Lillian said, shaking her head. I think either the question or the answer need to be changed. It simply isn't realistic. Even just thinking about how easy it would be to steal something if you could go invisible (something probably anyone has thought about at least once in their life) would have forced her to answer with YES. Hell, with her wanting to become a Hero, its doubly more likely that she has had such thoughts, not because she wants to commit crimes by using powers, but because she would have thought about how a Villain could use certain powers to comit certain crimes, and how she could then counter them. And its tripply more likely because she was born pre-Pandora, a time where having such thhoughts would have had absolutely zero consequence, thought experiment or not. Sonya should not be asking whther she fantasized or considered such ideas, but instead for the intent behind those fantasies and considerations.

AstraAllie

Thanks for the chapter!💕

jeff

My guest is her powers are link to Gaia.

mapts

Just caught up, thanks for the rapid releases I love it. Probably my favorite superhero story I’ve ever read, seriously keep it up.

Pam Cakes28

But does he consider them to be crimes? After all, We know she does have a connection to supervillains, she just doesn’t know it.

Blackjack

Im honestly curious if marc is truly Otis. If all the recruiters are deploying some type of test and he gets asked questions similar to what Sonya asked lily. He's definitely gonna get caught. Because we know he's committed crimes with his powers before.

Some BS Deity

I am super curious what her power is

Matthew A Elliott

Had a good day, felt jazzed after some downtime.

DuskDeadman

Damn you're just cranking them out right now

Brandon Lydick

I'm loving this new character, and especially the style of the writing and the way you've set up the POV's. I can't wait for Lillian to begin slowly learning everything about this new world of heroes, and maybe one day she'll discover the truth about Sonya.

Blackjack

TFTC

Wintermelody

Thanks for the Chapter


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