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Side Story: Vigilantes 1

🕑 Added 2024-08-28 16:00:06 +0000 UTC

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Hekyll

Bloodhound, not a bad name for Martin, all things considered.

Seri

The detective had been found so soon :o

Matthew A Elliott

That's the plan!

Sean

Just think about the side stories as parts of the book written in tandem with the actual story. I think if Broker is ever published, it'd be weird for side stories to occur ever 4 chapters, but if they occur correctly within the pacing of the story then they probably make the book much better.

Matthew A Elliott

Just think of it as a long form version of the pov switches in brackets. I'm trying to get better with pacing them so that they fit together well but I need to keep all the moving pieces going~

Matthew A Elliott

Lmao! It's okay! I appreciate you. I totally misunderstood what you were saying. You guys mean a lot to me.

Krazo

I guess I didn't use the format correctly, I wanted it to work like "before vs after" formats, not a straight comparison

Matthew A Elliott

Sounded like you weren't enjoying the main chapters xD

Thundermike00

I was hoping for a main chapter today. I know the side chapters give meaning to the story. If so, couldn't they be released on the weekend when you feel like doing something extra?

Krazo

😱 Why the sad face? Was I misunderstood? I'm saying that this side story is even better than normal main chapters!

Matthew A Elliott

:(

Krazo

It's a side story: "Oh no! Side story!" Reading the Side Story: "Damn it's good, better than main chapters"


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