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245 Snafu
🕑 Added 2025-02-11 17:53:33 +0000 UTCThe oldest draft posted for some reason. The. Chapter has been updated
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Sunniest Day
Oh, probably why I did not find anything, I was trying to find some changes to the story itself in the chapter, my bad. Thanks for the chapter as always !
Matthew A Elliott
Lots of little details and phrasing I fixed during editing to make it shine.
Sunniest Day
After reading both I can't find any glaring change ? Am I genuinely blind ?
