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113. Azad

🕑 Added 2025-02-03 06:30:15 +0000 UTC

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Charles Borchard

I went back and tightened up some of the tense issues, and reworked a few sentences for better reading.

Mrs Cotton

What could he have done different in your opinion? What would be a smarter use of his powers?

Hayden

The hero-anime stuff feels a little juvenile, but then again they are juveniles. Wonder when Burgess will actually start making use of his powers in a smart manner, could've gone so much further


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