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57. Birth of a Nation

🕑 Added 2024-09-03 00:24:46 +0000 UTC

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Edgar Fig

Thanks for reading and glad you're enjoying. What you're describing is likely not intended. Feel free to point out if something feels jarring on a chapter. Unfortunately, I don't always get enough time for in-depth editing.

FauxCouer

Hi! Thank you for the chapters, I'm loving the story so far and the glimpses of the world beyond the Frontier you've revealed so far. One little criticism I have is in the earlier chapters characters would remark on or be confused by Marks modern idioms and phrases. It's a little odd now that some characters like the acolytes use those very same phrases. Maybe the kids are learning from their favorite Imperator haha


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