tamarinfrog
patreon
BUP WOTN Page 3 - Step By Step
🕑 Added 2020-05-27 13:12:55 +0000 UTCHere's progress of page 3.
Interesting point about this page is the first panel. Original script just has Marian handing out the phone to Whinter. And as I worked on the page layout, it was clear the second panel needed a lot of space for all the dialog Marian had. Thus, the first panel became really tall. I made it work with having a nice tree shot but it did feel empty still. This inspired me to add some extra dialog and thus Whinter thinking Marian was also handing him gifts happened.
This is a nice example of me keeping the script always alive and how new ideas can happen while I draw the page.
Logan's smug face is also a higlight of this page. So have a close up of that.
Comments
Oh Logan... Pfff XD And that's an interesting page development!
