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Sinful Behavior (1/4)

🕑 Added 2014-10-20 05:47:56 +0000 UTC

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Trejaan Cavelion

So, he had a cane amongst his most prized possessions? Almost as though it belonged to someone who meant a great deal to him. I WONDER who that might have been! Hmmm...

Annie K

This is the most amazing pairing that I didn't even know I needed in my life. So much canon.

Rei Loire

Somehow had thathunch already that there might be places where herb is seen just like hour so the h is unpronounced.

Rukis

In America (or at least in my neck of the woods) we pronounce 'herb' like ERB, not HERB. So 'an' is appropriate. That's one of those words that gets pronounced differently the world over, though.

Rei Loire

I'm not quite sure I read that right in the end, but it seems that Johannes also won't reveal their findings to Luther. That throws up then up the question how the cattle dog learned about it or if perhaps even Ransom was the one to spill it to the admiral as the only thing that would let the coyote make that choice is when Puck is in mortal danger. Also Proof reafer report: 'and there was an herb garden outside the front stoop' if I'm right it should be 'a herb garden'

Cosmo

Fantastic!

Connor Laleff

Ahhhh so good! I love the parallels between them. Great writing, Rukis!

Ratshaman

MOAR!

Ratshaman

proof-ratter report: "...,deep enough that he'd believed my tales of C`row." sneaky apostrophe intrusion


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