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Legacy Chapter 12
🕑 Added 2016-05-19 19:28:06 +0000 UTC Raja is the roommate from hell.As always, comments are appreciated! Helps me catch things before I post it on FA.
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Ty Laurich
id be lying if the beginning of this chapter didnt remind me of my roommates in college...
CastJudgment
Another awesome chapter. I was wondering what would finally drive them from the "Lotus Lands" (Greek reference for fellow nerds out there). I can see in the future that Raja might fight with a bit more conviction in this coming fight to protect the one place he feels happy. Hopefully he doesn't get Lochan-ed. Looking forward to seeing who the Northerners are.
Connor Laleff
Took me a while, but just finished and it was a great chapter (unsurprisingly). Kadar and Ahsan are an adorable couple and I like the uncertainty of who is attacking and who they are there for. I do hope that if and when they escape it'll be with Raja. He's a dick, but he's our dick <3
Tiller Brown
Yup, you were right. Kadar is quite the romantic XD. And I had a feeling that the peace was nearing an end. Time to start nervously awaiting each chapter again!
ProwlingPaws
Certainly not a bad one for some of us XD
Rukis
lol, freudian slip :P
Rukis
thanks!
Baylock
There's one line where it says "I've have seen that kind of wound before". It appears that the line was altered, though not corrected. c:
ProwlingPaws
Amazing chapter-love Kadar's romantic side and can't wait to see what happens next :D Did see one typo-it says "feet" instead of "feed" :)
