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'Kindred' Part 3
🕑 Added 2019-10-01 08:01:47 +0000 UTCTechnically this includes up to part 2 of chapter 2. I'll have art of the characters for you all soon ;)
The conspiracy begins!
Comments
Rukis
Thank you for that! See, this is why I need beta readers
KiskaBeaust
I see one minor discrepancy. You describe his room as having no windows but then have Finnigan staring out a window at the end. Otherwise, this is an amazing start and I'm hopelessly hooked like many of your others.
Marcwolf
Many thanks for letting us readers in to your world's again :)
Marcwolf
Great start.. I am hooked already.
