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Throne Hunters Book 2, Chapter 31

🕑 Added 2024-07-26 13:00:17 +0000 UTC

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SAB

In Chapter 12 it was mentioned that Harald could only have his Servitor summoned for 10 minutes while at two Thrones, and 20 minutes at three. It seems like he's had him summoned for much longer than that during this raid. Perhaps I misunderstand?

Travis Brown

Why even have a team if everything’s always works out better without them. It’s a lot like level 10 you set the MC up to learn a serious lesson about his limits, teamwork, or the danger of overconfidence. There were no substantial consequences though so it feels like nothing was learned. He gets a strong talking to for putting everyone’s life at risk and running off that’s it. The dungeon should be dangerous and deadly as you’ve shown with the dwarfs story. Serious mistakes need real meaningful consequences or it feels hollow and like plot Armor. Scars, debilitating injuries, mental trauma, loss of trust or respect, and death are all options to show both danger and the costs of mistakes.

Travis Brown

I can’t say I’m a big fan of this direction. There was serious drama with him losing control to the point he hurt his love interest. He gets a demon skill and still reasons himself into pushing forward and leaving his friends behind then gets an artifact that lets him talk to gobs and immediately forgets his obsessive rush to play around with the goblins? It feels like a huge build up that’s going to have severe consequences where MC will learn why Nessa and Vic are right then nothing, he just gets distracted.

ShivaMcTimber

TYFTC!

SirWinsALot

hilarious chap

Lorenz

Nothing like hobgob soup for motivation!


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