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Illicit Alliance Update 2-28

🕑 Added 2022-03-01 03:09:19 +0000 UTC

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Trejaan Cavelion

also, "That's like the Robert of Huudari names" LOL

Trejaan Cavelion

I love the whole thing where he talks about his noble intentions but admits that he's just one man and no matter what he does, the biggest way he could EVER effect the status quo would be to inspire others

Connor Laleff

Loved it! It must be so challenging not wanting to write Grayson and Luther immediately connecting and being friendly. Gotta built up to it.

Marcwolf

The threads of this Tapestry are endless and yet wonderous. Where will they lead us in their weaving.

Marcwolf

Loved this.. And the name drops too. I think that Reed is continually having to re-evaluate Luther, and each time the bar moves higher. I'm also sensing the instinct to comfortably work under a more capable, stronger canine that Reed is putting off. I doubt that he's really mean anyone of Luther's caliber yet.

Kentendo1

You have an amazing way of writing stories. It's extremely hard to stop reading and always has me guessing to what might happen next. As someone who's been reading this series since Heretic, I see what you mean about "pointing at the screen meme". It's like every individual story is a small piece of a masterly crafted puzzle that of which portrays a living, breathing world. This is "Lord of the Rings" Good. Thank you for the Amazing content.

Trejaan Cavelion

I was going to send this to you as a letter, but you'd just complained you didn't get as many comments on Patreon as on FA... I hope this helps ;)

Trejaan Cavelion

very powerful ending to the chapter! Love some of the things this one is setting up!

Trejaan Cavelion

scared fox is scared

Trejaan Cavelion

also interesting that he'd been quick to analyze the mechanics... not the reason... probably didn't need to wonder since he knew Luther is gay

Trejaan Cavelion

caught looking at Luther's scars... nice that he could recognize that there'd been more than one flogging involved.

Trejaan Cavelion

it's spelled 'recuperation' BTW

Trejaan Cavelion

We'd just had to kill someone. (love that he has such trouble getting over that)

Trejaan Cavelion

OMG! THERE'S the namedrop! a loris!!! ( I know... it's Ahsan, but still...)

Trejaan Cavelion

“Don’t mistake my wanting to keep a clear head for having a weak constitution,” he muttered. LOL

Trejaan Cavelion

“That is the most Amurescan thing you’ve ever said,” I laughed at him. (it WAS such an imperial thing to say)

Trejaan Cavelion

watching a fish trying to flee... a very nice and unexpected metaphor... gives an insight into some of the enigma of the cattle dog

Trejaan Cavelion

"And I wanted so badly to meet him." love that

Trejaan Cavelion

um... maybe because she IS asking him to choose?

Trejaan Cavelion

"The name I’d leave scrawled in my wake in the history books would be a mess for cleverer men and women to sort out." nice to see he's still 'progressive' enough to think of women as being capable of being historians... a rarity in his time ;)