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Throne Hunters Book 3, Chapter 34

🕑 Added 2025-03-11 19:31:05 +0000 UTC

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SAB

I've held my tongue, so to speak, about this entire misadventure against Gorkin until the MCs were caught and about to suffer consequences. That's now happened, so I feel compelled to say my piece. I feel like this book's plotting is as unfocused as an ADHD kid stuffed with candy. Four antagonists: Gorkin, Thracos, Vorakhar/Wirmas/the Seed, and the angel. Something like a half-dozen goals: harm Gorkin, earn scales for Sonora, grow in personal power, learn to control oneself/resist darkness, learn to be a better friend, complete Thracos' challenges. All this within the span of a mere two weeks or so in-story time and a few dozen chapters. The pacing and context switching makes me feel like I'm watching a ping pong ball bounce around. Currently, the only thing with an actual time limit is the duel with Thracos, so there's no reason preparing Harald for that shouldn't be their sole focus. Everything else that isn't in service to that imminent goal could have waited. Especially picking this fight with Gorkin is blatantly illogical and has no discernable upside. Either they are caught and have to deal with him and his forces which means taking time away from duel preparation, or they aren't caught but realistically accomplish little before the duel is expected to take place anyway. Sorana could continue coasting financially for the time being, and after Thracos is dealt with they'll all be that much more powerful and ready to challenge Gorkin. This book is missing some badly needed justification, some reason they had to pick a fight with Gorkin *now* instead of in a month or two.

Matt Spratte

Damn Gorkin is way more of a threat than I initially thought


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