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Throne Hunters Book Four, Chapter 34

🕑 Added 2025-06-17 14:00:09 +0000 UTC

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Phil Tucker

Good catch on the parallel! But fear not, I don't intend to walk the same path twice...

Mark Timmony

Have to say I’m disappointed with the direction Vic’s gone - but also not surprised given his demon seed. Actually, just had a thought. This situation reminds me a lot of the one between James and Bjorn in DotV 🫤 especially with Harald’s threat to kill him if he hurts another Throne Hunter again…

Lorenz

Wow! Love that Harald punched Vic and laid down the law over him ever touching Anna or their friends again…really hope Harald and Vic don’t have to battle to the death at some point as I like them both….and would hate to see Vic die

Phil Tucker

I mean, you're entitled to your opinion, for sure. I'd like to think I provided in-world justifications for their decisions, but if those justifications don't work for you, that's fine. For one, Harald joined Sonora for protection in exchange for helping her with her cause. He hated the injustice of what she was experiencing, and wanted to help. Was he the best at executing this plan? No. Would it have been smarter for him to take a year or two to become Level 15 and then wipe the map with Gorkin? Yes. But he took his vow to help in exchange for her protection from House Celestara seriously, and got to work the best he could. Second, with the Disc broken it was only a matter of days before another Inquisitor or Gold-ranker found them. There was no guarantee that Seraphina would return to help them. Staying in the Dungeon was not an option. Nor was leaving it, as the Portal was guaranteed to be watched. The moment they emerged they'd be nabbed. So yes, they could have kept going deeper but to what end? Inevitably someone would find them and kill them. Better to try a desperate plan than just hide and wait for death.

SAB

So, here's the thing. You write very compelling narratives and combat scenes. In critical moments Harald and company are all gas and no brakes, and it makes for awesome scenes and eventual triumphs. My issue is that's all undermined somewhat by the idiotic decision-making of the group (particularly Harald) at the start. Their illogical and unforced errors at the beginning of a book results in them getting into desperate situations where your writing then shines. It's like if they decided to jump into a volcano for no discernible reason, and then the rest of the book is them cleverly figuring out and performing feats of miracles to avoid plunging into the lava at the bottom. Two specific examples: One, at the beginning of book 3, there was no reason for Harald to decide he needed to start attacking Gorkin immediately, rather than focusing on getting stronger for his imminent fight with Thracos. Sorona had been coasting for years with the scales from Vic's/Nessa's occasional dungeon delves and there was no indication her situation had suddenly changed such that she was now desperate to have her businesses back from Gorkin immediately. Even worse, after seemingly getting away with it the first time, Harald decided to poke the Gorkin bear again with a plan that was much less stealthy and basically guaranteed to get them caught (other party members don't have stealth) without even having a contingency plan of what to do if they were caught! Two, it's not believable that the group ever thought their convoluted plan with the Crown could work. That they even got this far foreseeably relied numerous stronger people somehow (unbelievably) deciding not to immediately capture or kill them with overwhelming force. Harald even acknowledges it was doomed to failure in this chapter. After they got rid of both Thracos and the Inquisitor, how is this desperate plan they thought about for five seconds better than taking their chances with the dungeon itself? Either stay in the dungeon and hunt for food, or do a quick trip up to grab lots of food/etc. While not foolproof, it at least had the benefit of not putting their lives directly into the hands of stronger enemies and hoping for the best. In both examples, it's clear these illogical and hasty decisions were written to put them on a collision course with the eventual climax. IMO, the climaxes are great, but the hamfisted ways they were forced to happen dampens my enjoyment of them.


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