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Magical Marvel: The Rise of Arthur Hayes : Ch. 45

🕑 Added 2025-04-14 19:44:47 +0000 UTC

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box boy b

whens the next drop

Ejaaz

This was the result of making AI convert the dialogues to British. Not sure if it right though. If it feels annoying, I can avoid doing that.

Hurl3z

I think you are overdoing it a bit when you keep using the format of "something, that," like in "bit beyond my skill set, that is" or "rather curious, that," all the time. It feels like you are aiming for a speech pattern, but instead, it comes across as an obsessive tic. I am not saying this just to criticize you—maybe it is how you envisioned the character, and that’s okay, you are the author. It’s just that I think it makes the dialogue feel mechanical and kind of annoying. Thanks for the chapter.


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