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Magical Marvel: The Rise of Arthur Hayes : Ch. 163
🕑 Added 2025-09-12 21:27:27 +0000 UTCChapter 163: Unintended Consequences
The first night was quiet work.
His fingers brushed the back of a soldier’s neck beneath a cracked helmet, the back of a general’s neck as he adjusted his coat. Each touch was brief. A whisper of magic. A rune sank into the skin, vanished instantly, leaving no trace but the silent pulse of its connection to the control crystal back in the shelter.
By dawn, forty-three marks had been laid. Forty-three minds now prepared to receive an eye-opening dream.
Back at the shelter, Arthur sat cross-legged before the control rune, both hands resting on its surface. The crystal pulsed in response.
“The first set is done,” he said, his voice hoarse from hours of focus. “Now we wait.”
“I hope this works.”
“It should. Otherwise, this is a hopeless situation.” Arthur stood and stretched his stiff muscles. “By the way, I’m heading back to Earth. Coming?”
“Why?”
“Need to rest and recharge. For some reason, I’m not recovering properly here. Maybe it’s the pollution. The dreams won’t start until tonight anyway. Coming?”
“No.” She shook her head. “I don’t need to recharge. You did all the work. I’ll stay and monitor the situation.”
Arthur nodded and opened a portal back to London, stepping into his study as morning sunlight streamed through the windows.
The familiar scent of old books was a relief after Hala’s toxic air. Winky appeared immediately with tea and breakfast.
“Master is back! Was everything good?”
“Complicated.” Arthur accepted the tea gratefully. “How are things here? Did Ariadne come and apologize?”
“Miss Ari did!” Winky beamed. “And she brought gifts!”
“Good.” He took a slow sip. “Where is she now?”
“Miss Ari is planning.”
Arthur smiled faintly. “Then I won’t disturb her.”
He sank into his favorite chair and stared out the window at the London skyline—quiet, normal, alive. Quite a contrast to any city on Hala.
“Is there any food left?” he asked. “I’m starving.”
“Winky will be right back!” Pop!
—
Three days of careful observation followed.
Arthur and Carol took shifts monitoring Hala, tracking the dreams through the control rune.
The dreams were transmitting perfectly. Too perfectly. People woke pale, hollow-eyed, whispering about nightmares they couldn’t shake. They spoke in hushed tones of dying suns, empty seas, and children coughing through dust that would never settle. The visions had taken root exactly as intended.
But the conflict hadn’t softened. If anything, it had sharpened.
“It’s not working,” Carol said, frustration sharp in her voice. “The dreams are having an effect… but not the one we wanted.”
Arthur leaned over her shoulder, reviewing the data. His exhaustion made the Kree script swim before his eyes. “They’re… accelerating the war?”
“The ambitious generals, yes. They see the visions as confirmation that time is running out. Their logic is simple - win quickly before devastation becomes complete. Secure resources for their side before everything collapses.”
Arthur slumped in his chair. "I didn't account for that interpretation."
“Several commanders have already given speeches about ‘defeating the enemy before Hala’s final sunset.’ They’re using the dreams as propaganda, Arthur. Proof that victory must come swiftly.”
On the screens, they watched footage of General Kor-Vann addressing his troops:
“The visions show us Hala’s death! But they also show us the cause—division, weakness, the failure to achieve total victory! We must win now, completely, or condemn our children to extinction!”
“This is a disaster,” Arthur muttered. “The fighting’s intensified?”
“Casualty rates are up thirty percent. They’re throwing everything into massive offensives—trying to end the war before the visions come true.”
Arthur pressed his palms against his eyes. Days of draining work, and he’d made things worse. “I need to modify the dreams. Add conditional elements.”
“Conditional?”
“The visions will change based on their choices. If they choose violence, they’ll see a future ruled by corpses and ash. If they choose peace, they’ll glimpse what’s still possible.” He moved toward the control rune, though his hands trembled with fatigue. “This will require multiple dream tracks for each person—at least a dozen variants. If they think victory is the answer, I’ll show them otherwise.”
Carol watched him begin the intricate spellwork. “That’s… dark.”
“It needs to be,” Arthur replied. “They have to understand that winning through blind violence means losing everything that matters.”
—
The modified dream campaign pushed Arthur beyond his limits. Every day, he crafted intricate vision sequences with branching paths tailored to each dreamer’s decisions. The magic required delicate precision. Too heavy-handed and the dreams would feel artificial, too subtle and they’d be dismissed as meaningless.
A commander who chose assault would witness his victory in vivid detail: standing alone on a dead world, enemies destroyed but Hala’s ecosystem ripped apart along with them.
The same commander choosing negotiation would see green returning to the planet, children playing in restored gardens, and both factions working together toward a shared future.
Despite the exhausting work, Arthur still checked in on Earth.
“How are things here? How’s Ariadne?” he asked Winky after one particularly grueling day.
"Miss Ari is good! Destroyed another Hand warehouse yesterday. Very efficient. Killed the big bad guy in the warehouse and blew up their bad things. Miss Ari called them drugs."
"Good. Any problems?"
"No problems. Winky and Miss Ari went out for ice cream after!"
Those were reassuring signs. He’d worried that the night at the Hand’s headquarters might have affected her mentally. But it seemed everything was fine and he was probably just being paranoid.
—
Two more weeks ground by. Arthur split his time between Hala and Earth.
His days on Hala were consumed by the dream network—pouring every ounce of energy into crafting, refining, and sustaining the visions. His nights on Earth were spent recovering just enough to continue. His magical reserves felt perpetually drained, like trying to fill a bucket with a hole at the bottom.
But the conditional dreams were starting to work. Some commanders began questioning their strategies, unsettled by visions that shifted depending on their choices. War councils erupted in heated debates. Soldiers hesitated before obeying orders. Doubt was creeping in.
Then came the breakthrough.
“There’s someone you need to see,” Carol said, pulling up intercepted footage. “Her name is Dar-Benn. Young soldier, low-ranking, but she’s gathering followers from both factions.”
On the screen, a Kree woman stood before a mixed crowd inside what looked like an abandoned warehouse.
“We thought the dreams were punishment,” she said, her voice calm and steady as the wind whispered around them. “But what if they’re a plea?”
A murmur rippled through the crowd.
“What if Hala isn’t trying to scare us?” she continued. “What if it’s asking us to stop? To choose differently? The visions don’t lie—but they don’t tell us what to do. They only show us what happens if we keep doing the same thing.”
A boy in the front raised his hand. “So… what do we do?”
Dar-Benn scanned the faces before her—soldiers hardened by war, mothers who had lost children, elders who had seen too much death.
“We listen,” she said. “And then… we choose.”
Arthur watched the clip three times.
“She thinks the planet is sending the visions?” he asked.
“That’s what’s spreading,” Carol replied. “The growing belief is that Hala’s dying spirit is reaching out in desperation.”
Arthur studied Dar-Benn’s posture, the way the crowd leaned in, hungry to catch every word. She had that rare quality—genuine conviction that made others want to believe. “She’s compelling. But the old guard won’t just step aside.”
“No,” Carol agreed, “but she’s building momentum. More people are joining her movement every day. She’s offering them something neither faction’s leaders can—hope without conquest.”
Arthur nodded, already recalculating his next move. He’d need to mark more people, especially those attending Dar-Benn’s gatherings. He’d refine the visions to support her message—show them not just destruction, but the possibility of redemption.
“This might actually work,” he said quietly.
“Don’t jinx it,” Carol warned, though she was smiling. For the first time since they’d started, she looked like she actually believed they might succeed.
Comments
Nazarickk
Thanks for the chapter
roysola
Nice take on Carol's personal story.
