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FACTORY wip 1
🕑 Added 2021-12-18 17:49:33 +0000 UTCworking on some captioned pictures! im trying to balance out writing enough interesting detail vs not writing entire essays (which is my greatest strength AND weakness... nobody ever taught me how to shut my mouth LMAO)
a play on the typical factory setting, here's an excerpt from my rough draft:
Mia was professionally, but sexily dressed for her brand deal. With her two-toned pastel goth hair carefully laid down her back, she was clad in a blue button up sleeveless dress shirt, held in place by a thick black belt. A black pencil skirt and matching modest black flats finished her business casual look as she and her friends were led into the candy making room, followed closely by a small film crew. As a successful gaming streamer, Mia had been offered a partnership by an indie candy company, with an exclusive tour of their facilities that she'd promote. Win win! Her sweet tooth was unmatched, and the candy makers got good publicity. Even better, the head candy maker was a hunky guy just about Mia's age (and type!). The candy maker grandiosely threw open a set of bold colored swinging doors and ushered them into a room full of strange machinery. "This is my favorite part of our home here - the inventing room!" the trio of girls marveled at the complex contraptions before them. Mia sauntered around, cameramen capturing every hip swing with flattering angles, before she stopped dead in front of a dish of enticing blue candies. She glanced back at the candymaker, who was geeking about the workings of the machines with the similarly industrial minded Bobbie.
(this isnt even half of the first panel - see what i mean about running my mouth? lol)
Comments
BIDO
aaaa thanks!! im definitely shaving it down atm, just trying to let the words support the visuals instead lol
JustAmvicious
Oh my. You really like covering a lot of story! That's fine though. As long ax the story got me hooked, I won't mind reading essays <3
