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EYON Galaxes - Chapter 1 - Prologue [Preview][Redux]
🕑 Added 2023-07-31 09:22:33 +0000 UTCNow THIS is why I'm leaning more towards continuing Eyon Galaxies, because I see this as MY version of Star Wars- a very own original story that is more or less inspired by the greatest science-fiction epic I have ever watched (I've seen Star Trek too, but Star Wars felt more mystical and engrossing for me).
In the years since I first wrote down the idea, I have had the chance to improve, refine and work on the original concept, making it far better than what I was originally going for.
Summary: This is a more epic and personal story from before, which follows the journey of a young Andur Nova Sunrider, a thirteen year old slave boy working in the Star Ore mines on a warlord's planet. After working in those dark depths for as long as he can remember, one night while gazing up at the sky after a long day of digging by his lonesome, he witnesses a meteorite falling from the heavens. When he investigates the crash site, he discovers something inside that will propel him down the path towards his destiny... that of a Hero.
I personally love these three pages- from the cover of Andur witnessing the meteorite falling, to the cave paintings of the impact of this universe's 'Force', which takes the physical form of the highly coveted resource known as Star Dust.
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Comments
Yes. He's the main villain, my version of Vader. I've renamed him of course.
Chris Cannon
Now I’m already liking it better than the original prologue. These pages so far have a cinematic feel to them. Will the Shadow Knight still be present in this?
Matthew Souther
This is really cool and I’d love to see more but I hope you still return to your Star Wars rewrite someday too!
RandomBrit
Those first two pages are amazing!
