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Chapter 83

🕑 Added 2022-11-29 03:41:24 +0000 UTC

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novess

Yes! I thought the first version definitely had potential but it actually doesn't make a lot of sense. I ended the first version with the MC being in his daze, Li Yifan approaching him, and Xia Lihua showing up. But her appearance wasn't because she was jealous or anything, rather she was being protective of the MC because when he is in that daze state, he is most vulnerable. I thought about writing it like this but then remembered that in the MC's fight with Fang Yu, Lihua should've noticed he was in that daze state once before but she has never acted. So seeing the flaw in the logic, I decided to change it. I do apologize for that, and I will definitely try not to change chapters too often

Lord Shiva

Eh, I liked the ending of the first version better. Mostly because of Lihua jealously and confession that she loved him.

TYRELL GRAY

I love it- good job, keep up with the good work


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