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Chapter 72 - Pressure Points

🕑 Added 2025-09-27 13:37:12 +0000 UTC

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Benjamin Thomas

That's because I set the price in AUD :| I didn't know how to change it at the time. Other authors have pointed out how, but I couldn't yesterday because apparently Patreon calculates stuff on the 1st! Also... I think it's fine. They're in a world where phones still exist, though most people don't use them. There are behaviors that are recognizable as someone interacting with an implant (though now it's the System interface). They all use them. References like that would also naturally evolve to cover new usage.

Gardor

"The Queen held up a hand for silence as she spoke rapidly to whoever was on the other end."-> think ya should define how he assumes her communication works, because "other end" implies a connection or two devices or something. "Other end of the line", for example, because the idiom came from telephone lines. Whether its her power or the "implant" and shes just talking into thin air, i think you should mention where at least her "end" is. Pedantic, i know. Blame it on the extra fifty cents patreon subscription fee, im unreasonably salty about it.


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