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REMEDIAL SEX-ED: SIDE STORY 9, PART 3 OF 3
🕑 Added 2021-12-25 13:44:41 +0000 UTCPhew! I managed to contain the "inanimate TF" elements to 3-4 pages! I know it's not as popular, but I have to get it out of my system every once in a while, else I explode!
I think 75 pages ended up being a bit too long for this story. I imagine the ideal page count will vary based on the plot, so I think next time I'll reach the monthly page count by splitting it between 2 stories that'll keep me from artificially extending the length. One long and one short, with the short one covering for any deficiency.
BTW, there's gonna be a surprise announced on January 1st. I don't normally push like this, but I'd really consider sticking around into the next month if I were you guys. You'll see what I mean.
(Full PDF attached to Part 1)
Comments
LeWorms
I liked it. It gives real stakes to a story that would otherwise be a cute story about a dude turning into a living Barbie doll.
SigmaGal
Ya, for sure. Completely understandable.
Zaczac121
I didn't mean the ending was bad, each to their own, I just found it dark myself personally.
SigmaGal
Fetishes are amazing like that. Even preferences in food and art don't have that kind of range in how they are experienced. I'm into inanimate TFs, and I remember reading a panty one, being pretty into it, until it intimately described, like, five big wet farts. Ah! No! You just gotta laugh sometimes.
icarue
Ending aside, I like these side stories a lot! But about the ending, fetishes are very very nishe. What is liked by one is hated by another. So I don't mind the experimentation. Even TG, which is a popular fetish, is not universally liked and I imagine people could be turned off by the idea of switching genders. But I have a whole Patreon worth of TG games... so I am biased af.
Nayatha
Hello, this is Superlife Alert, What you are turning into a bimbo doll named Barbie, Let me check your policy with us. Sorry it looks like you are not up to date at this time, if you like I can update the policy now. Hello? Hello???
SigmaGal
I definitely absorbed the positivity. <3
Hyperdonut
Just thought I'd clarify that I'd be in favor of alternate endings for posts, not that I was in any way disappointed with the ending you provided. I hope my first post didn't come across as such. ^^;
SigmaGal
That 'edge,' that 'permanency' is something I personally look for in these kinds of stories, so I'm gonna keep doing it... But I'm sympathetic to people who say it's off-putting. Hopefully alternate endings can be implemented well and make everyone happy.
LeWorms
Quite liked this one. Keep up the good work :). Don’t be to worried about the ending. I think the villain should keep her but that’s just me. Would take off some of the edge while still keeping the idea that she’s now a plaything.
SigmaGal
Superheroes have gotta deal with this nonsense all the time. I'm sure they've got some kind of life-alert implanted in their super skulls.
Nayatha
I have no problem with inanimate transformation and won’t mind seeing more. If superhero should be use to them and have protocols in place to locate transformed hero’s or villains and restore them of possible or find good places if not possible
Hyperdonut
I'd definitely be in favor of something like this, such as the second shot of the Barbie Beam reinforcing the mental changes only, rather than the full transformation. Out of all the side stories you've made so far, though, this one's definitely one of my favorites now! Dollification is something I've always enjoyed a great deal. And that goes double if the victim isn't inanimate by the end, but merely lost in the role of a toy. :) Whether you do opt to include an alternate ending or not, I'd happily enjoy seeing more of Galexa and her dollification cannon.
SigmaGal
That's fair. I had a sense it'd be controversial at least. I've been thinking about patching in a branching alternate end for this and whenever I do other stuff like it.
Zaczac121
Bit grim at the end ngl
