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HTN 3-1 A new story

🕑 Added 2019-12-12 21:33:15 +0000 UTC

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I didnt like her mopping around after all the fun of the last chapter, I understand why though so I would keep that part. I liked the added background info on who people were before they came in, overall I like the way this is going, she definitely needs to learn more about the world, and about her class before trying to go to another big city.

I would very much appreciate feedback on this story direction. It is designed to give Heather a new more serious goal of learning about the necromancer kings, and what they were doing. This gives me a direction for her character, and some goals for her to achieve.


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