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DKP- future story line, Thank you.
🕑 Added 2020-05-29 16:51:19 +0000 UTCSo the poll is still going and the Lilly thing is winning and I don't care. Thanks to your kind messages and support I spent the last couple of days rereading some of Lilly's big moments and coming to a better understanding. Lilly, is love. And Lilly loves Gersius. It doesn't matter that I can use the calling to justify it, Lilly and her emotions are the magic in this story, and going down this path cheapens EVERYTHING!
I also realize I am writing much better love between Lilly and Thayle than am with Lilly and Gersius. I suspect this is because I feel the relationship between Lilly and him is seen as more normal whereas between her and Thayle it is less so. So I go out of my way to show how loving and beautiful it is, while neglecting the poor husband.
This whole exercise has taught me a couple of things.
One the emotions of love and Lilly are the magic.
two People like how pure the characters are
three I need to give Gersius some love and attention. He needs to be foundation on which their love stands.
Also and this is a fun note. One of my readers admitted to using a bunch of accounts to vote for the Lilly line, and some people have contacted me to tell me they voted for it by accident. If you remove those votes and move them to the where they really wanted them, choice 2 is winning by a landslide.
So the story is going to change. It is going to focus even more on just how much our three characters love one another, and how that love carries them forward. Also chapter 17 will be late today I am rewriting it, and chapter 16 is going to be retconned and reposted.
And lastly, honestly, from the bottom of my heart. Thank all for the support and comments you gave me while I was considering this. I value those of you who comment here above ALL others because your the ones who have a deep connection to the story. The things you said made me take that second hard look, and saved me from making a big mistake. I can't say thank you enough.
