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DKP 5-16 A queen of warriors (Cannon Version)

🕑 Added 2020-06-05 02:20:19 +0000 UTC

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I was just reading chapter 16 again and I now feel it is odd Sarah would offer to carry thayle in an early chapter, then reaffirm that offer in chapter 16, then in 18 and 19 be unhappy about it. I am thinking of rewriting both 18 and 19 to undo that change. Although I do like how it ends in 19 with her daring to explore some of Lillys ways.


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