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HTN 4-15 Name this chapter

🕑 Added 2020-08-25 15:22:29 +0000 UTC

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Loved it

They do have scars, but because Heather is always the focus of the story we don't get as much info about the others. This was a good opportunity to shed some light on that. Also I am always amazed that people can see so much of a character when I am on the other side worried I haven't fleshed them out enough. Good eye seeing that Quinny jokes a lot to hide/avoid dealing with a pain.

Daniel Drake

I'd go with "Emotional Scars", Quinny and Frank have been scarred in some way. We know franks is because of his perception of himself on earth and Social Anxiety. I think Quinny has been hurt in some way, she just hides it by being straight forward and using humor. They both ran from their previous life's, to this. just my thoughts though, Thank you for the chapter sir !

OBS

Of Protagonists and Plot lines

Xultanis

Keep it, call it Confronting the Trope.

Feel free to suggest a name for this chapter, assuming I keep it.


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