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DKP 5-25 Hide and seek

🕑 Added 2020-07-17 17:32:33 +0000 UTC

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I would say most people hate Gedris, and by proxy they dislike Ayawa for seeing something in her. I have gotten private messages from people asking me to kill Gedris off. There are even a few posts saying the same thing on Royalroad. I needed Gedris as a tool to force Tavis to use his fire powers, AND to help with a later issue coming soon. I wrote her to be reckless, headstrong, but also caring and self sacrificial. Somebody who could be a great person if somebody took the time to help them grow, hence why Ayawa is taking an interest. Gedris is also a good tool to ferret out Ayawa's secrets, since Gedris spent time in the southern plains with her people. She knows Ayawa's culture and practices, and again this will be important later. Ayawa has done something VERY important but the readers don't know it yet, Gedris will be the one who brings it to light. I like Gedris myself. A lot of people are like her, acting before they think things through with the best of intentions in heart. Maybe that's why people don't like her, they see to much of themselves in her.

WhiteRabbit

Not sure why people hate on them so much, is it the characters themselves or just that it is not Gersius?

I know a lot of my readers don't care for Tavis and Ayawa, and hate Gedris. I am intentionally not filling in their backstory very much, making many illusions to past trials and secrets. Thankfully this is the last chapter where they are separate of our group, and I wont have to write a solo chapter for them for quite awhile. There will be more when the doan wars come, but for now they are over. I am thinking about writing a whole book just about them so you can see what happened to Ayawa that made her who she is, and explain a lot of her mystery. We shall see.


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