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🕑 Added 2020-10-03 22:02:47 +0000 UTCThe next chapter is written but I am fixing some errors. When I first described Thayle's sword I called it glitteroot. First of all I should have named it glitter root. Secondly at some point I started callling it silver rain which was mean to be a sword for Lilly. This just shows how tired I am sometimes while I write. I am going to mention Thayle's sword in the this chapter with the original name, please do not be confused. I have no idea how often I have called this sword silver rain in earlier chapters. Also I was supposed to foreshadow the dragon forms Gersius and Thayle have by mentioning there were slits in the back of their dragon knight armor. There was supposed to be a whole dialog where they discuss what role these serve. This is so they can wear them in their dragon forms and not impede their wings. I have hunted through the chapter where they receive the armor, and the four after it and no mention of these slits was found. Do any of you remember me mentioning this at all?
Anyway the chapter is coming, I am struggling on a scene where the armor slits need to be mentioned, and I hate that it will now be a total surprise since I failed to foreshadow it. Or I think I did, I can't really focus right now. Give me four or five hours to clean this up and get it ready.
Thank you.
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Yeah I don't think I added it. I found the rough draft of the conversation, and forgot to put it in the actual chapter. I hate details like this coming out of nowhere later. I like to foreshadow them so it grounds them in the story.
WhiteRabbit
If you mentioned it I completely missed it.
