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DKP 6-3 A mother at heart.

🕑 Added 2020-11-07 04:46:14 +0000 UTC

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WhiteRabbit

Of course, I am-> no comma Thayles robe-> Thayle's

Thanks, sometimes dialog like that can be "daring". I also assumed Sarah would pridefully take the aggressive path even if she was nervous about it. This chapter was nearly 12k long, I took 5k out of it to become the next chapter.

Sam4005

The chapter is long enough for the flow to be good. The discussion between gersius and ayawa creat a break in time. I think its fit Sarah personality to be the aggressor but at the same time be in vulnerable position. Nah its funny, not really over the top for me, ill eat them whenever i could ;) . Ty for chapy

Sorry this was so late. I would like to ask if the tone of this feels off? I read it a dozen times and I kept thinking, this starts with Thayle taking a huge emotional blow, shifts to intimacy with Sarahg with Thayle is kind of pushing for, then shifts again where Sarah becomes the aggressor. Also I keep thinking that Lilly's logic about not being afraid to taste Thayles flesh when she has eaten human women before might be a little over the top. OR it might be prefect dragon logic, I can't tell which.


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