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Heather book 5 chapter 5 ending poll.

🕑 Added 2020-12-17 04:48:26 +0000 UTC

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Well I’m only about 4 months late to the party XD But I like the bookstore ending

Thank you for saying so. I was VERY nervous about taking this step. And I wasn't sure how it would be received. The big test will be in the next 12 hours when I release this chapter to RoyalRoad and the larger audience gets to react to it. I pray it is received well.

Hi. I Think the relationship should happen, but not with the relationship ending. Add some more teasing from Q and let him come to the decision the change the appearance for him self. Let it slowly flow into place. Probably like half way in part 5. Sorry if this is a bit opinionated but i think it is better to weave it in the story a bit more naturally. Anyway great work im really enjoying the story. :) Edit: after reading a bit further i must say something... I was wrong. Combined ending was great and the follow chapter flowed nicely. Sorry. ;P

Just a note, I have written all the chapters that follow so I could easily remove the relationship. So if you haven't voted please do. If it tips in favor of the NO relationship bookstore ending I will go to royalroad with that one, and scrub the relationship. So do not think this poll is over. There is still time to change the course.

I think it's official, Frank and Heather are going to have a relationship. I will rework the ending to blend them both and repost it later.