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Heather news, relationship retcon incoming.
🕑 Added 2021-01-31 05:25:55 +0000 UTCI am just going to open and say I am retconning the relationship out.
Royal road voted in favor of having the relationship, but keeping it in the background which is what I wanted. However, if you read the comments it is a different story. This chapter got a lot more comments than I usually get and the VAST majority of them want the relationship, but they want it to develop more slowly over the chapters. This means I have to put some focus on the relationship in order to develop it. Which I thought I was already doing with how Heather goes insane whenever Frank is in danger, and how Frank always fights to protect her. I thought the scene in the palanquin when she was laying against his chest so they could use her panel was a good clue, but it missed. Anyway, I have a choice now. Put more focus on a slowly building relationship and ensure it is obvious, OR abandon it altogether.
After trying to build a few timelines, and realizing this interferes with a story arc I need frank to be in a relationship for I have to admit it needs to be abandoned. I can resolve the Frank arc one of two ways, by forming a relationship with Quinny where the two admit they have secretly been spending time together off screen, or I introduce a new character I already have developed and had intended to use as a rather bold, and forward character. She was meant to make Heather uncomfortable with her brashness, but she can be used as a means to land Frank with a girlfriend for the arc.
Maybe I will add that as a poll.
Comments
New poll is probably the way to go, I was not in favor in a Heather+Frank relationship, but it seemed to work well. My initial thought was that they should be in relationships just not with each other, you were building Frank up for Heather though even Quinny was teasing them about it for a while so you definitely hinted at it. Either way I am enjoying your stories so far.
