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A Retrospective: Magical Charm & Demonic Fun
🕑 Added 2019-07-28 19:24:29 +0000 UTCMagical Charm & Demonic Fun, my first story, was released on October 24, 2017, and I felt proud of it at the time. Some time has passed, and my writing style has changed since then. So, I thought it would be a good idea to go over the story and see how it holds up with a fresh pair of eyes.
I made an annotated version of the story on Google Docs so that everyone could see my thoughts, plus bonus information about the story. I don't know if I'll do any more reviews like this in the future, or if they'll be patron-only or not, but this one will remain open to everyone.
If you haven't already, I highly recommend reading the non-annotated version first.
