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Pokemon: The Origin of Species Ch. 130: Unadorned

🕑 Added 2024-07-03 20:48:18 +0000 UTC

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Tobias Wegener

Thank you for the warm welcome. As you like feedback, here some small point in an overall very well written story (I am around chapter 57 now). Leaf transition to writing (at around the museum arc) as Journalist is kind of sudden and unexpected, all other characters have general conceivable progression, but Leaf's switch to writing is kind of unexpected, at least for me. Maybe I didn't get enough POV of Leaf before that, in the later parts of the story it is way better presented (Leaf's POV). Overall it is really great story and very engaging to read and a lot to learn from it. You said in a comment, that you were unsure of the POV of Leaf, but I think when you do it, you do great. That's my 5 cent after reading for like 5 months, I am still at it and I enjoy it a lot sofar. Keep up the great work. Thanks for writing it, when I through with Pokémon, I will try your original. Best regards a fan. Tobias

Tobias Wegener

Thanks, and I am sure I will. :)

Daystar Eld

Welcome, and hope you continue to enjoy it :)

Tobias Wegener

Hi, came at the right time, I am so ready for a new good rationalist fanfic story. Looking forward to reading it. Did find you by the Askwho podcast and have like zero knowledge about Pokémon, but I really enjoy your writing style so far. Thank you very much for writing it and packing it into a well performing EPUB. Wish you all the best for your further work. Best regards, Tobias