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Book 2: Chapter 11: Gatewick’s New Order

🕑 Added 2025-08-03 02:29:46 +0000 UTC

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Trytan

Thank you for your words! I’m really glad to read your feedback. Yeah, the first chapters are a little rough in some ways, because I was trying to show how Grace perceives herself at that time. On the other hand, I learned a lot while writing and I definitely feel like I need to rewrite certain parts; for example, to introduce the calendar earlier. But I’ll need more time for that. Oh God, I just pressed enter on my smartphone to make a new paragraph up above and… yeah now I deleted my comment by accident and rewrite it, I feel your pain with this Patreon UI. Smartphone is even worse.

Bunny

Lovely!

The Time walrus

wow I binged this story really fast. The first few chapters are rough. I actually originally tried to read this a month or two ago before dropping it. Luckily I decided to give it another try and I'm really happy I did because it's matured into something I really love. It's kind of funny, Grace has actually in a lot of ways become less 'powerful' than she was in chapter 4: less emotionally/mentally stable, less mana density, less driven. Lilliana has also removed Grace as a political actor by effectively exiling her to the countryside. Though in this case I think that Liliana is using Gatewick to either test Grace or give her a space to build a solid foundation with little outside interference. I think it's also interesting how little of what Grace has gained has been because she was actually trying to get it instead of her just having it given to her for what I'm going to call 'good behaviour'. When you take a step back despite how big of a game Grace constantly talks inside her own head, she's actually kind of utterly failed to ever gain the initiative. Which, to be fair, is pretty reasonable when your opponents are gods, eldritch horrors or yourself from the future? In anycase I really hope Grace can get her shit together and start fulfilling these dramatic declarations of intent she's always vowing in her head. Because damn, she does know how to sound like she's about to do something really cool but she's also really good at not actually following that up with any action. I also really hope Grace doesn't become too emotionally reliant on Clara. I feel like there is no way that story ends well for either of them. I forgot that enter posts the comments instead of creating a new line in Patreon. I swear they hired a bunch of sadists for UX designers; there is no way you can make a UI this bad by accident.


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