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Looking for Roommate - Pg 13

🕑 Added 2019-04-13 17:01:00 +0000 UTC

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Roseleaf

I chose not to address her penis for a couple reasons. One, a penis doesn't define her as a woman or a man. There are plenty of awesome transwomen who still have a dick, as it's a costly surgery. I didn't feel like harping on it here. Two there wasn't a panel that really seemed like I needed to address it. Sure a few that I could have used, but nothing that screamed at me. If it matters, I would say, sometime between sunbathing and here it vanished or became so small we don't mention it.

Martin Lock

Yes, those panties do fit snugly - a bit different from the recent photos of Jude Law in tight white speedos in the newspapers this week! One possibility about any "bonus" text has just occurred to me - perhaps Quinn could narrate it in the first person, as if looking back at various snapshots taken during the change in his life...?

Bob Fink

I like how this is going and Martin's suggestions are good ones and well said. I'm assuming based on the previous picture and how well the panties fit without a noticeable bulge that he has lost his penis as well as grown nice sized and shaped breasts.

Martin Lock

No text paragraphs are needed this time, as we move straight on - that's an interesting selection of book Candace has, by the way, a change from my rows of paperbacks. Scripting a comic is never easy - I'd like to offer a longer version of Quinn's thanks, but space on a page is always at a premium, and too many word balloons can be off-putting. Oh heck, maybe a little bit of this might be useful for your final draft: "I don't want to be sappy, Candace, but thank you for, like, all of this. Obviously the magic - but if I was doing this on my own, I don't know how I'd have managed, without all the support and encouragement you have given me. I've always been too scared to tell anyone... but you've been so supportive, even helping me dress. Thank you!" Or words to that effect. The bra seems to fit nicely now - do we know if Quinn has reached a stage at which, um, he pees sitting down...?