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Looking for Roommate - Pg 21

🕑 Added 2019-04-21 17:00:02 +0000 UTC
Looking for Roommate - Pg 21

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Martin Lock

A change to a person's reality is probably more in keeping with the genre here. Otherwise, we have an unannounced time-jump between pages of quite a few months - and I don't remember any references to Quinn's workplace before. "My boss has been okay about my transitioning, supportive even, though of course he thinks I'm just taking hormones." I think I'd prefer that more mundane approach, as, time-jumps apart, it does give more continuity to Quinn's character.

Roseleaf

Or over the time of the change, Quinn told work she was trans and this is part of the transition. Both readings are correct.

Roseleaf

She's quite something.

Martin Lock

This is strange - a reality shift, so that Quinnberly has always been a woman, as far as the office is concerned, and remembers being thought of as a small-breasted woman? Candace has done some powerful magic!

Bob Fink

With the sweater blouse she's wearing I can see why, she has an amazing figure.


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