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Open Trade - pg 50
🕑 Added 2022-01-03 15:00:06 +0000 UTCWe made it to page 50!!
So a little world building here. I get worried when I shove a lot of exposition back to back. I know it can be a lot with explaining how the app can update record and introducing the idea that salons can use heavily regulated nanobots.
We'll get into it a bit more on future pages.
Comments
Roseleaf
Exactly, what is going on with Wyatt is more public knowledge. So there would be changes to world around her, compared to our world.
Roseleaf
Thanks for the feedback. I've updated the page.
Roseleaf
Absolutely. Totally fair game.
Mr. Domino
World building is good, with a concept like this it is needed more than it was in Con Artist, since it's a common thing used by so many people around the world. With Con Artist, there's less of a need since it's a limited number of characters in a relatively closed environment, but with Open Trade, building up everything in the world is definitely a good idea.
Czarzhan
Of course, whatever work they have done in the salon might get traded away next time they're on the show.
Martin Lock
"I'm sure it's a common enough name not to be a big deal." "The name must have gotten stuck in my head without me realizing it." "You'll look amazing. Ready?" And if that sign says "We Work With Nano-Bots" then the slightly obscured middle word looks more like "Wlll" than anything else, with the uprights so close together. A nice page, though!
