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Open Trade - Pg 102
🕑 Added 2022-10-09 04:14:13 +0000 UTCDate night comes to an end. Or does it.
Should they have a second date?
Comments
Roseleaf
potentially a new dynamic duo.
jimmy d banthrall jr
I think that they are awesome together.
Roseleaf
I personally like "one more" over "another" in this instance. I like that it is slower and more deliberate. "they're"/"they are" will probably also be suggested by femur, and likely be changed at some point. Its one of those lines I rewrote like 5 times, but I'll agree "they're" is smoother. Also for completion, Stephanie stopped using contractions when her primary language changed. But I'm sure I missed one somewhere.
Halima Abdi
Time for Round Two! As a note, for panel one, Alex could say "Or you could stay here and go another round." And for panel two, Xaiver could use "they're" instead of "they are"; It'd just sound more natural for them.
Roseleaf
So, which of them pays for the second date?
Sam Mann
Hmm, let me think ab- Yes!!!
