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Open Trade - Pg 177
🕑 Added 2023-10-11 05:24:02 +0000 UTCA lot of panels today as Stephanie and Lexi discuss their plans for the day, and what has been going on for the last month. Stephanie goes off on a bit of a rant.
With a lot of smaller panels there is less space for our Live Chat, but it is still open. Leave you comments below with the "username" and I'll add them in here, or on the next page. Sometime there is a lag with chat. lol.
Also working on finding the balance with Lexi's new accent to have it present, but not so overpowering that it is difficult to read.
A couple other things, I made a collection to help people catch up or re-read Open Trade, but was finding it was difficult to find a specific page as it was so long. So I have broken it down to separate issues. I know it shows up on the app to help people jump around more when reading.
How graphic/raunchy/dirty do you want things? There were other things I thought of Stephanie saying, but pulled it back to what we have here. Do you like more? Less? It's just right?
Comments
Modera
banana420: Steph, calm down with the horny or you’re gonna do something and get banned again lol
Roseleaf
I do get to work backwards a bit, which is nice and let the characters have secrets. I do have a couple things I wanted to do, but it's a little.more difficult to get them in the story they way that I would like to.
Rockhopper
Let see, Steph’s already hooked up on a date, Lexi’s already gone full Monty three seconds into her trade, I think the horse is kinda out of the barn on this one when it comes to ratings. So long as it’s in service to the story I don’t think there’s a limit as to where you take things. If you were Steph or Lexi, what would do? You’d live life and sometimes it would get messy, confusing and sometimes raunchy. (Besides, no one wants to see Steph and Lexi go to the library or work on their taxes…) You also now have freedom as a creator with the time jumps to jump in and out of story beats to engage the reader without having to put in shoe leather (sorry, writers term). In one time jump we could suddenly find that Lexi went on a date with a guy and fell for him hard while Steph has become internet famous because of “something”. You then get to add the details as you want.
Roseleaf
Heehee
Czarzhan
7th panel Genderbender582: They scre-- I mean They stif-- Damn, I can't seem declare they cheated you without it coming off as a slut pun.
