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Open Trade - 250
🕑 Added 2024-10-14 14:00:11 +0000 UTCWe have hit 250 pages! While I didn't plan for this stuff to coincide with a few major changes, we have a few notable things going on.
Victory did her first Trade. She has been changed by nanobots before, but the first time she has done a trade. I'm keeping Victory mostly intact and making some smaller, surface level changes to maybe help out Victory.
Lexi has lost her Scottish Accent. Ultimately, it I felt it didn't work as well as I had wanted to. Because Steph's accent/language trade was much more dramatic, it was easier to showcase her struggles without hindering the readers. Typing out the Scottish accent and slang/language really becomes unreadbale very quickly. With the additional narrative weight Lexi is taking on, I can't leave her with something that either has no effect or leaves people struggling to read it.
We did a poll for Lexi's next trade. We are still doing that. Just got pushed back a little bit.
Next page, we'll check in with Stephanie and Mina as they land in another country.
We'll come back to Lexi and Victory next month!
Comments
Roseleaf
I like her general vibe alot as well. I knew I couldn't do anything too dramatic. But I was required by law to have Lexi try to egg her into a trade.
Speedball
Oh thank goodness, I liked V's general design so much I was worried we'd lose that.
Roseleaf
I thought it would be more fun to not point it out.
Pop26
At first I was confused of what she traded then I realized her boobs are bigger.
