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Lara's Hell 1min intro WIP
🕑 Added 2021-08-13 15:14:10 +0000 UTCHey!
Here is the WIP intro part of Lara's Hell (because apparently I can't make a video without an introduction XD).
To be honest I have a little concern about the fact that it is understandable. I tried to get lot of feedback and I hope that at least the main points are clear, what do you think?
Also keep in mind that the sound and voices will probably be a major factor of understandability here ^^.
Have a nice Week-End and take care ^^.
Comments
Yeah right, maybe I could try something else with transitions thanks ^^!
Jordan Andrew Scherr
It is very much understandable, but you might consider less cutting back and forth, or some kind of transition between the Entity and Lara's location. Perhaps a fadeout as if these where flashes from a memory or vision.
Glad you noticed ^^. And you are partially right, loving submissive sex doesn't mechanically exclude being a Tomb Raider ;) .
Yay!! Ok thank you for your feedback and appreciation man ^^!
UltClash
Interesting that she seems quite turned on by the men arriving in her cell with that gag, seems she won't be a Tomb Raider for much longer
Mr. J
I adore what I see! π I especially know what context the dude with the sack has now! I think itβs perfectly understandable so far :D. Have a great weekend too^^
