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Spire's Spite - Arc 2 - Chapter 16

🕑 Added 2024-06-30 03:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Silver Beard

I said it was early; I didn't say it was impossible. I'm sure Fritz and Bert will be fine. His crew need their paths and those early level attribute bonuses. After that- let chips fall as they will. Like Bert pointed out- they need a real boss to liven things up. If it's another human; so be it

Rip Woodham

Well it is natural that when you're that low on the totem pole in a world where to an extent might makes right, there's going to be a lot of threats out of your league, some of which might have it out for you. And I do like to be aware of the threats. :) I'm just personally more of a comfy reader, and there is a feeling with all of these threats that something bad needs to happen even though I really don't want that because things can't always work out well in the face of what they're up against and their naivety.

Octophobia

There is a lot going on, maybe a little too much honestly lol. I just like the reader to be aware of the multitude of threats rather than springing them on you out of nowhere. Plus Fritz is pretty paranoid so it suits his viewpoint that he's being hunted from all sides. *Bit of a spoiler here.* But fear not, the raider will be surprised and very much vexed by how quickly they Climb the spire due to Door Sense and other advantages. *spoiler ends* Thanks for the feedback. :)

Rip Woodham

Yeah.... We've got multiple directions of threat with the Nightshark, plus an all-powerful Guild that killed his family, plus now being hunted by someone, and plus the noble caste he lives under which would crush him like a bug for the slightest reason. All are multiple realms of power higher than him. The spires are deadly enough... so yeah lol. One common criticism I somewhat share does seem to be that things can be a little over the top. And I like really long stories, so I hate when anything is rushed. But so far I personally like the time the story tends to take with characters and their stories. Else I'd be worried about the pace.

Silver Beard

I agree; I just think it's early. Fritz might be downplaying the feeling now he'll wake up to being hunted soon enough. Just feels premature. One hunter will attract others and Fritz isn't yet at a level he can easily deal with this level of attention. This group would get slaughtered if the Hunter catches up to them before the halfway point.

Rip Woodham

Well he's being hunted by a raider. They target the weak, and it sounds like these religiously follow a 'code' that is pretty bad mojo. It didn't seem like it took much to set that guy off, and he said something that he shouldn't have to Fritz and Bert, that could get him in trouble. Fritz also just acts in a way that would make some people want to hurt him. People killing other people over nothing is probably not that unusual in this kind of setting, and spires seem like a good place. It what happened to Fritz's father after all. I think Fritz should already be thinking of that guy...

Silver Beard

Thanks for sharing. The hunted bit is a little over much; too soon. He's essentially level 11? He's not a threat to anyone of power or otherwise. Still a mouse. Take desperate predator to target and stalk a weakling like him. Someone thinks they'll get an easy kill. Look forward to fritz gutting him neck to nutz...eventually.


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