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Spire's Spite Chapter 57

🕑 Added 2024-05-09 03:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Octophobia

Thanks for finding the typo :) Fixed.

Silver Beard

Your writing flows well; but there was one bit that was esp jarring. "manner precise manner." Shouldn't be hard to find...

Octophobia

I think you nailed it on the head. I'm not a particularly quick writer, and I like my chapters to be a bit bigger than the standard LitRPG 1500-2000 word length. Combine that with a keen dislike for word padding and my chapters come out slower than usual 5x a week releases of other stories. Still, I'm glad you've stuck with the story even if it's a little slow, I really appreciate it! :) As for swimming to the surface, all will be revealed...next chapter.

Silver Beard

So, will they have to swim to the surface? Ugh- you don't post often enough :) Hate to say it but smaller stories take time to saturate reader appetites; especially those who like EPICS. More will come has it grows.

Silver Beard

Hoping his Father educated him about banks.. perhaps he even visited once with his Father before his passing. Better get established sooner than later.

Silver Beard

You wrapped up most of the outstanding mini-arcs and the tower climb. Though I am wondering how they'll secure their new wealth. Suppose I'm hoping the one who tossed them in will let them keep some...half maybe?

Octophobia

Stat points next chapter, glad you enjoyed this one! :)

Silver Beard

Awesome chapter; only thing missing was Stat points but hopefully he'll be able to adjust to the bone improvement without points in strength. Thanks for sharing.


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