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Spire's Spite - Arc 2 - Chapter 60

🕑 Added 2024-12-01 02:00:04 +0000 UTC

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yohan gu

Forth through the eely floor!

Octophobia

Such is the burden of being an MC. :) Thanks for reading!

Octophobia

Thanks for the edits! George is far too sensible for such a thing as Spire romances, far too sensible. :)

Octophobia

Thanks for the advice! Apparently, you can't link outside of royal road in the story description it just breaks the link, thanks for notifying me. :)

Go0tz

Tftc! I love the story, but I think you're leaving money on the table because the description link to Patreon is broken. Also, I would recommend getting at least 10+ Chapters on Patreon since it is gaining momentum on Royal Road and it would help to add fuel to your growth

Veager

"Is that a terrible crime now is it?" Lauren asked. I think that there should be a comma - Is that a terrible crime now, is it? But i'm not sure, my english grammar is not very great. "That's not so bad," Rosie said. They're harmless, just a little shock. Unless they bite you, they hold on like bastards." missing quotation mark - Rosie said. "They're harmless... "It might well be, Lauren agreed, seemingly glad that the conversation had moved on. missing quotation mark - "It might well be" Lauren agreed "Does it?"Fritz asked blandly. This is probably too nitpicky, but there's a missing space between "Fritz 'but the man smiled a lot and blushed a little' - I'm still not sure if George is lucky or not for seemingly being the only gay dude in the party. On one hand, there's no romance drama; on the other, there's no romance. :D Tftc!

Malcolm Haynes

Tftc! Aberrants seem attracted to Fritz. πŸ˜‚


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