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Spire's Spite - Arc 3 - Chapter 36

🕑 Added 2025-05-11 03:00:03 +0000 UTC

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Octophobia

This is one of the things that slips Fritz's mind, he's got too many things going on and their past argument is putting him off. It's sort of a plot point for later. Thanks for the feedback. :)

Rui Lourenço

Just as a heads up, I think there's a bit of a chronology plot hole unless I missed something: There was supposed to be an off day where he should've met his brother which as far as I can tell coincides with this very day. So Adam showing up and the off day never happening doesn't make sense! Only realized after the most current chapter when I noticed we never got to see how his brother was supposedly a better swordsman.

Octophobia

Thanks for the feedback. Edited to: "He couldn't blame her. Though he also considered it just recompense for jumping to conclusions as she had."

Octophobia

Yeah. I hate that guy!

Octophobia

He has not. Maybe once he's not so busy. :)

Venno

Can’t wait cutter to get his comeuppance

Kaladin

Did Fritz ever get his loot back from that hidden room in the drowned district? I know he held off once because of shooting animals and the nightshark, but not sure if he every returned?

R D

The sentence "Who could blame her?" sticks out poorly here, its the only time I remember the narrator has spoken directly like that cutting it or tying it into Fritz's thoughts would read better in my opinion


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